[Denied] Montolos's application

[montolos 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Montolos

How old are you?: 15.

Are you aware the server is PG-13: Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The no metagaming.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: Nope.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found it well i was looking for role-play servers .

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications : None.

 

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: Creating your own alter persona in a fictional world, or Acting as a alter persona

What is metagaming?: using outside information to benefit your character.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Using emotes that don't give the other player a chance to react.

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Kalvin Vanderfell

Character’s sex: Male.

Character’s race: Highlander.

Character’s age: 25

Biography : Abandoned as a infant and raised by dark elfs in the city of Ebonglade. He started learning to fight at 8 showing a natural talent with pole-arms specifically a Glaive.

After a band of orcs killed his adoptive parents, he was taken captive by the orcs and tortured relentlessly for 4 years, witch caused his hair to turn mostly white(Marie Antoinette syndrome)

The first chance he got to escape he took killing his captors mercilessly.Alone and starving the 15 year old Kalvin found his way to the human kingdom of Asluon members of the flayers seeing

his skill in killing things without much care brought him into the group of bandits. In the 6 years he was a member of this organization he gained the name "The Executioner" a title given because of the

manny heads he cleaved off of people with his Glaive.

  At the age of 21 is when he left the group preferring to go alone from now on. Kalvin found work where he could acting as a bodyguard and Mercenary leading him to here he is now.

Personality Traits: Loner,Calm,Cruel to an extent.

Ambitions: He wants to find a quiet secluded place live away from others.

Strengths/Talents: Has a mastery over Glaive's and other pole arms as well as a deep knowledge of martial arts and swords.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Dose not feel empathy for others and has poor social skills

Appearance: Piercing purple eyes, white/black hair, 6'7" tall with muscle proportionate to his hight.

Skin: A little tanner than pale.

[Skylez 870]

Sadly this application is Denied for the following reasons.

 

 

-Please avoid the whole "Orcs killed my parents" cliche. If you want to keep a tragic scenario in your biography, think of something different.

 

- Make sure that you add a few more references to the lore such as he has traveled to or aspires to go to, or events he has participated in. Use the wiki for this.

 

- Your biography is also a bit too short, it should include were he came from, what he has accomplished so far and how he has gotten to the point he is presently at.

 

-Your persona is too young to have traveled to the human kingdom in Asulon, as he was born in the most recent realm, Vailor.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours, if you have any questions or comments feel free to message me from my forum account.

 

 

 

[Skylez 870]

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