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What’s your Minecraft account name?:RoleTheDice

How old are you?:24

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Soreading information about players gets you a ban

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: YouTube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:changing ones behaviour to asume a role

What is metagaming: an out of character action where a players character makes use of knowledge that the player is aware of but the character is not meant to be aware of

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: being unfair and giving your character traits that are far fetched or over powered

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) zuka stormborn

Character’s sex: (male or female?)male

Character’s race: Human (you can find all the playable races here.)

Character’s age:22 (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)

Biography  Zuka and his brother Draco where born in a mercinary camp and the camp was raided so they where split up at the age of 3 what they didn't know was that they where both sent to the same northern city but by different people (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

Personality Traits:quiet sick minded loves putting people in pain hates guards (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)

Ambitions: just wants to kill for a living because his family was killed (what does your character aspire to be?)

Strengths/Talents:Parkour , Tracking, Marcial arts , stealth, and blades (what is your character really, really good at?)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: can't swim to great isn't good at talking and has anger problems (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)

Appearance:scar on his back that know one knows about and has brown hair and about 5,9 (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)to

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here

 

 

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[jamesb 218]

 

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- There is plagiarism in your definitions. I will give you a warning, but plagiarizing again will result in a ban from applying. If you need help with your definitions, you may visit HERE, but be sure to use your own words.

 

- You must add your character's race.

 

- Your biography is extremely lacking. It must be a decent two paragraphs long, and include server lore. For aid in findingg server lore, you may visit LotC's wiki HERE.

 

- Please change your ambitions/biography a bit -- having one's family killed and then becoming a bloodthirsty mercenary is cliche and overused.

 

- Please add some non-combat based strengths.

Good luck on your next application!

[jamesb 218]

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