[Denied] My Application

[Edraithna 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Edraithna

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes, If I have not please tell me

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No greifing of houses

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):Not yet

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:Youtube Video

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):N/A

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:Being a character other than yourself, and doing it well

What is metagaming?:Going beyond your characters ability

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:That would be me telling another player how to act

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Edraithna (It is Lord of the Rings language, but it should not be copyrighted. If it is well...

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:Elf, wanderer

Character’s age:30

Biography: My character has no family, hence the wanderer, in the past (character knows little of) a raid party of several races had a grudge with the leader of the village. It resulted in war. The village being attacked his mother put him in a basket into the river. It was carried away to a village, it was there that he grew up. He gained a father and mother of the human race. They were one of the few who believed in race equality. So Edraithna also came to know the meaning of race equality. he grew up and became friends with tree elves, humans, and half-lings. He mainly had to travel to meet his friends, for they were different races.

His occupation became hunter, because of his speed and being quiet footed. His favorite weapons are a bow and a short sword. He some adapted another occupation being a guard for the village he lived in. He ow rarely visits that village for he is a wanderer.

Personality Traits:He loves rain and carving likes talking to his favorite races, Human, tree elves, and half-lings. He often makes puns, and he hates spiders. He loves exploring

Ambitions:To be in a group of rangers.

Strengths/Talents:Making friends shooting a bow, and being a hunter (this includes tracking and that sort), being stealthy good hearing and can see long distances

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Fear of spiders sword skill staying on task, and staying in one place

Appearance: fairly strong appearance of a soldier all ways in traveling clothes wear blues, and yes he is a blond, and sky blue eyes

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[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-All 3 of your definitions are incorrect.

 

-Having one's character randomly killed/estranged from their child by unnamed raiders is extremely cliche, and overused. If you wish for your character's parents to be deceased/estranged, please find a more original reason.

 

-Your character's biography is strewn with typos and errors.

 

-Your character's biography includes no server lore. There is no such thing as tree elves.

 

-The armor used for your minecraft skin is the Faraam armor from Dark souls 2. Looking at the armor, it is a large heavy with plate and chainmail armor that goes directly against the description of your character being a light and quiet footed hunter. 

 

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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