[Denied] My appilcation

[Lighters_striker 1]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Lighters_striker

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):metagamiing rules?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Youtube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): dont have any sorry.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Role-playing is the action of being a character and experience there emotion and thought threw that specific character, and is meant for fun!

What is metagaming?: The use of information beyond your character life and use it as  Guiadance 

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:The act of a character doing something that their unable to do.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Vol' Emons

Character’s sex: (male or female?)Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Orc(uraki)

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 30 years old

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Vol' Emons was always different from his orc brethren, while they seek war he seek peace. when Vol was born in 1517 his heart didn't beat fast enough so his skin turned blue, and the people of Kharak'Raguk threw his family out because of his deformity. Vol' Emons and his family move to Vrogak'Gorki were a goblin were he was taught that knowledge can be as power as strength. But one day Vol' decided to join the graduck military , and learn very useful skills tactics and fighting. After that Vol' met a shaman in Kahn'Braduk that thought him of the spiritual connections to the world and he found great interest about this, Now Vol' Emon is a set on helping his brethren at home or even the battle field.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)Likes to meditate or think, he trains to keep shape and he strives to serve others. But dislike the use of war machine on the battle field.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Vol' Emons strives to be become a shaman so he can united his people and the other races.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Good at spear combat, reading,negotiating, and translating

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Vol' is not good at torturing enemies , and need to improve his war skills

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Vol'Emons is 6 ft tall, and has blue skin with red hair. He wear white war paint on his face, and he wear pants made of thick boar hide and has strap of leather around his body.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide http://static.planetminecraft.com/files/resource_media/preview/1425/voljin1dot8_minecraft_skin-7722867.jpg.- the link sorry :(

Edited June 5, 2016 by Lighters_striker
i messed up :(

[jamesb 218]

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Your metagaming definition is incorrect. For help with your metagaming definition, visit HERE, but be sure to use your own words.

 

- Kharak'Raguk, Vrogak'Gork, and Kahn'Braduk are all people, not places.

 

- If Vol was born in 1517, he would not be 30 years old, as the current date on LotC is 1562.

 

- Being a peace-loving orc directly opposes the Orcish curse, which makes them combative, war-hungry and violent. Please change this about your character.

 

- Your skin link is not working.

 

- An orc's skin does not turn blue due to their heart not beating fast enough.

Good luck on your next application!

[jamesb 218]

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