[Denied] Joeyperry's application

[Asendedbluenova 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:                         joeyperry.
How old are you?:                                13.
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):    Yes.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:                        Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:                    Keep the agressave/inappropriate language to a minimum.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?:            No.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:                    Minecraft econemy server listings.
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):                This is my first application.
 
 

 
What is roleplaying?:            Acting like an in game charicter.
What is metagaming?:            (In short) The gaming community.
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:    (In short) A type of gameplay within a game.
 

Character’s name:                                                 Nova
Character’s sex:                                               Male
Character’s race:                              Farfolk (I would like to be an elder farfolk)
Character’s age:                           60      (115 If i can be like an elder)
Biography: My charicter is and elder far folk named Nova. Threw the years he has grown in wisdom along with power. Nova was born in 1901 with a group of siblings but later they all seperated and eventully died for sepret reasons. Nova lived along but he is stronger than he has ever been before. He has a strenght power he can take on beasts with only a helmet and his fist
but he has a major weakness in age he has grown slower and can easly be overpowered by 10 silverfish or 12 zombies,in all he can take on powerfull beast but he can be overcome from multiple weaklings. He has sailed around the world on his boat in the pirate age and even stood toe to toe with the legendary Monkey D Luffy he has battled many fierce beast such as dragons and krackens.
Now his fighting days are over but he can still pack a punch. he wants to grow a grand and properouse empire to rule over nations and make everbody happy in his nation.

Personality Traits:His habits consist of watching animea daming up rivers and owning pets. Likes Sweet tea, animea,manga,dogs,cities,games,and wrestling. He dislikes tomatoes,running,cleaning,and squides
Ambitions: He has already gained almost everthing he has wanted but he would like to rule a nation.
Strengths/Talents: withstanding pain, balancing objects, building, fixing thecnology, and wrestling.
Weaknesses/Inabilities:Speed, knowing when to quit, parkore, and scamming
Appearance:He is an old man in a ninga sute with a average hight and large build.
Skin: http://imgur.com/a/T2kI8   (Thats my skin)

[Skylez 870]

This application is... Denied.

 

Your application is denied for the following reasons.

 

- All three of your definitions need to be reworded.

 

- Your character could not have been born in 1901 as we have not reached that date in LoTC

 

 

-You need at least three points of lore in your biography, use the wiki for this!

 

- Your biography also needs to be two paragraphs.

 

- Having looked up 'Monkey D Luffy' he is a character in another fictional setting, and therefore he does not exist in the LoTC universe.

 

- The application is littered with spelling and grammatical errors, please try and correct most of these.

 

-Various things in your application do not being in a fantasy universe such as this server, those things being:

Anime and Manga.

 

-Your skin is not appropriate for the server, please find or make a fantasy/medieval skin.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours.

If you have any questions, or need help writing and application, feel free to send me a PM on my forum profile. 

[Skylez 870]

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