[Denied] Application

[Tessaaa_ 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Tessaaa_
How old are you?: 12
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): My parents approved (Yes)
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  Excessive trolling 
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: YouTube
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

What is roleplaying?: Creating a story as you go.
What is metagaming?: Strategies you use in games 
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: When you force someone to follow your story

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Annalyn
Character’s sex: (male or female?) Female
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Elf
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 112
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)My character comes from a little country side farm called Heartland. Annalyn has travelled to 30 places over 10 years. My character was born in 1904. Annalyn's family has gone separate ways has never spoke anymore after a fire has come on the farm where she came from so the family has never seen each other ever since. Annalyn has many animals with her she is such an animal person more than a social person she, can get kinda crazy when she sees many new people but she has learnt a lot when she was travelling and got more used to humans. Annalyn, misses her family but she was also the odd one out of the family she was so different she ran away but wanted to go back but she knew she that they wouldn't care if she was gone 
Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Shy, animal lover, kind, sweet, caring, has anxiety, crazy 
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Horse rider and less shy to people
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Really good at archery 
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) practice with fighting better
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)1meter 85cm, blonde hair colour
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-All 3 of your definitions are incorrect.

 

-Your character's biography includes no server lore.

 

-Your character's biography is using modern day dating. The world lordofthecraft takes place in has its own dating system, such can be found on the wiki.

 

-Your character's biography seems to moreso be an explanation of your character's personality. There is a section in the application for that.

 

-You dont explain where your character's  archery skills come from in their biography.

 

-Your minecraft skin is not suitable for an elf, or for the medieval fantasy setting Lordothecraft takes place in.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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