Sir, Caleb 0 Share Posted July 7, 2016 What’s your Minecraft account name?: xXAgarProYtXx How old are you?:13 Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes! Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yep! What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No Online Bulling Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):Nope! How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Looking up. "Role Playing Servers on Minecraft Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):First One Definitions Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial of your application! What is roleplaying?:When you act like a Char, And when some one hits/touches you do something like this "Hey! Why did you do that" For Touches. For hitting *Hed Fell down, Hitting the floor hard* What is metagaming?: Something the affect The game, Or rp. What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:When someone act like a god and don't die, Aka *Id Grap My Sword And Hit My Head Broken it open, And still standing that like its was notin (Sorry if I spell that) In-Character InformationNow you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play. Character’s name: Caleb Alexander Character’s sex: Male Character’s race: Human Character’s age: 12 Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): He Came From A Far Away Place That He Does Not Know What It is Called. He Moved To Many Places When Younger. Then he just stop Moving and where his is at today. His Brave, kind, And Well not give up In tell it well stop. His can be mean when your mean to him, but he well Forgive you if needed. When he grows up he well be a Knight. A brave, Strong, And not giving up knight. Personality Traits: He plays with swords a lot, He hates Wine, He like to play a lot. Ambitions: A Knight Strengths/Talents: Hes really good with swords. Weaknesses/Inabilities: He need to work on how to use a bow. Appearance: Brown Hair, 5 Feet Tall. No scars, Long Hair. Skin: http://www.minecraftskins.net/theduelist (My Skin) (Sorry I mess spell a lil. I had to rush, Because im about to go) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remyy 952 Share Posted July 7, 2016 Under Review Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remyy 952 Share Posted July 7, 2016 Denied Sadly your application has been Denied, you may reapply in 24 hours. Bellow is as to why your application has been denied. Your character must be 18, Humans can get as old as nearly 150 years old. Your METAGAMING definition is incorrect, please refer to this link for the correct definition https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming Your biography is too short, please at least make it a decent two paragraphs long, Your biography does not include any server lore, with no server lore its like your character does not exist in the world of Vailor! Perhaps have your character witness some event it history I.e the worm that destroyed Athera in 1513. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Holy_Orenian_Empire https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Felsen Your characters weakness is not really a weakness, "Needing to work on how to use a bow" Is something he could learn in time through roleplay. Perhaps give him a fear, a lust, ect. Your characters strength is not very much of a "Strenght" while he may be good with a sword, is he good at anything else? Cooking, Farming, Blacksmithing, ect. Add more to his personality; keep in mind it is a person, once more perhaps give him fears, lusts, ideas. Why would he want to be a night? your characters ambition does not line up with the biography, perhaps give him a reason as to WHY he wants to become one. You may reapply in 24 hours, feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remyy 952 Share Posted July 7, 2016 Moved to Denied Application Forum. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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