[✗] My Whitelist application (second application)

[RosySnapper 0]

What's your Minecraft account name?: RosySnapper

 

How old are you?: 14

 

What timezone are you in?: EAST

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won't be denied for being under 13): Yes, I'm aware this server is PG-13

 

Have your read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have. The rules are very agreeable. I understand the rules.

 

What's the rule you agree with the most?: "Cyber-bullying", through repeated harassment or any other means will not be tolerated. Those partaking in or promoting such will be severely punished.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don't make sense? (if so we can help or clear it up!): No, I understand all the rules.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Well, I love roleplaying so I was looking for some role-play servers. I found this server on minecraftforums. 

 

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): 

 

 

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes, indeed

 

What is roleplaying?: The act of being a character. Acting as that character, creating a story with your words, creating a life, doing things you would do in real life but more your way. You can make it up. It can be fantasy, realistic, or battles. Just you making a character playing that role, being that role.

 

 

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is basically going out of character.

 

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: A way of playing video games with a specific goal.

 

Character's name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Ambrosia

 

Character's sex: (male or female) female

 

Character's race: Forest Dwarves

 

Characters age: 36(Dwarf Age)

 

Biography: Ambrosia was born May 3rd, 1986. She was born in a tiny village that was remote. This remote village was at the edge of Al-Warkrah where no one ever went. She was to little to understand everything that was going on. But, their leader of the village died of strange things that were killing others in the forest. Ambrosia thought she had the perfect little life under her safe roof, while her parents and the rest of the villagers were fighting for life. They had to work 24/7 every single day. There was no break for them. Their life was on the line. Ambrosia's days were long and lonely. She had nothing to do but watch, pray, and eat, for her safety. Their were a little amount of villagers living in that village. That village was falling down into pieces. Once Ambrosia was old enough to understand what was going on, she noticed she didn't have it all. Like the children out in the cities, they had it all. They had, money, toys, everything you can imagine! Ambrosia always wondered what would happen tomorrow. She cried at night when her parents didn't come home. Ambrosia always loved being with her parents, all the time. She loved the stories her dad would tell her about the Duke War. Her dad fought in the Duke War. But he officially returned back to his home town village. He always use to tell how it was to sleep there, always wondering if someone would get hurt or you would get hurt! Her dad didn't think this village would end up like this. He was planning on moving with the family. Somewhere agreeable and safer. But, it never happened. All Ambrosia can think of is death, death, and death. She barely had friends to hang around with. All the parents told their kids to stay in the houses for safety. But once they were old enough to go out and work they would have to worry about death, bruises, monsters, all the dangers in life. It wasn't fun living there. Ambrosia was seventeen by now still a kid (for a dwarf). Seventeen is the age you are allowed to go outside and help out in that village. That day seemed like the best day to Ambrosia. She went outside got her axe swung it over her shoulders, she was ready! Ambrosia swung that axe at the tree seven or eight times. All she saw was trees and animals. She wondered what were all these creatures. She thought about it and thought, "What if these trees are the creatures homes!" she thought for a while sitting aside that tree staring at all the creatures she sees upon her. "HUH! Well if someone cut down my home I know I wouldn't be very kind to them. These animals are loosing their homes!! Thats it, I'm going to tell everyone about this." Ambrosia went home that day with no wood to give to the resource house(the resource house is the place they leave all their supplies after a day of work). Everyone looked at her wondering what she did while the whole time she was in the forest. They all stared at her. Her parents came up to her saying, "Ambrosia what have you done? With your help thats more supplies but look what you have brought....nothing? You do know your life isn't a fantasy?" Ambrosia started shaking with fear her thoughts were, "What if they don't believe me? They start to boo me? They are all going to think of me as that looser who dies because all she cares about is animals and not her family or her. Ya' know what? I'm going to do this!" She walked a couple of steps away from her parents she stood on a pile of wood and said, "Our village is hurting others!!!! These unlike creatures are killing us because we are hurting their environment! If we stop hurting their environment they'll stop hurting us!" All you can hear is screams. Everyone stopped to look around. Kids got their knives, adults got their swords. They ran off in a group to see what had happened. There!!! There it is!!!!! Blood was everywhere, five people were laying on the ground, dead. Parents told their kids to go back to stay in the village. Ambrosia had enough of this village. She ran off. She was out of that place. She wanted freedom. That was her dream, freedom. If you want a dream you have to fight for it! Ambrosia left a note on her parents bed. It said, "I love you more then you can imagine but I think my time here wasn't for me, wasn't the life I wanted to live. All this crime just isn't doing me any good!" Her parents came back after what had happened. They called for Ambrosia but never got a reply. Soon they saw the note. They cried for five days straight. Ambrosia ran off into the woods. How did she survive? Well she survived by eating berries in random fields. She soon found a town after 5 weeks of looking for a place to stay. It was called Salvus. She stayed there for a night or two. She learned a lot more then she did in her home town village. She learned how to make tools, clothing, tame animals, and so much more! Ambrosia was in love with music by now. With all the places and little tiny villages that were deserted she saw a lot of things she didn't know about. Especially left over things like rotten food, rats, mice, old clothing, burned houses, and old instruments. She always loved messing with the instruments but she always wondered how to play them. So once she left Salvus she found a little deserted house in a berry field which she stayed at for one night collecting all the berries she can. She saw a couple of instruments but, the one that brought her the most attention was the guitar. The next morning, when she was suppose to continue her journey she brought the guitar with her. She was dying to learn how to play it. She promised herself that the next town she goes to she'll ask others to teach her. Along Ambrosia's journey she kept thinking about her parents. But she couldn't. It would make her go crazy. Since, Ambrosia dealt with so many boys, she liked to prove she was better then boys. She liked to prove girls were better then boys!! Girl Power!!! Ambrosia traveled for one week and found Courland. As soon as Ambrosia got to Courland she met this girl named, Laurley. Laurley was a human but very friendly with others. She told stories of how her parents disappeared one day. But she didn't really care for her parents since they weren't the best of parents.  Laurley showed Ambrosia around and let her stay at her house. Laurley also showed Ambrosia how to play the guitar enough for Ambrosia to start making her own songs. Ambrosia fell in love with Laurley(as a friend). Ambrosia knew it was going to be tough to say good bye to Laurley but it had to be done. The day she left Courland everyone was there standing, saying good bye, handing her food and goodies to keep along for her long journey. Laurley gave her some gold coins to keep and a friendship necklace, which Ambrosia wears everyday. Ambrosia continued with the map they town folks gave her. Now, she knew where to go. It was very big. She went from town to town. The third town she landed in was Istria. Eh, it was ok. The people were cool and collective. But not the right village for her. But, she was only there to sail across the ocean to get to another town. Ambrosia used a couple of gold coins Laurley gave her to use for the boat ticket.  She was standing there by the ocean near the port. "I need to travel to that town across the ocean. I just need to!" She got on that boat. Sailed across that ocean to get to the other land. She was happy she got there. She was so joyful. One night, she was sitting on a pile of moss near a very big oak tree. She found a comfy position to sleep good and happy. All the animals started looking at this beautiful girl. They wondered "what might she be doing here? What will she do to us?" Ambrosia heard a loud squeak! She woke up in fear. It was a squirrel! She thought, "haha!!" She petted the squirrel "you're a good little animal." She laughed. The squirrel just stood there squeaking along. Ambrosia thought, "this..this place is for me!! I love the forest!" She had a good laugh and went back to sleep of course now with that squirrel she had named Otto. Otto stuck along with Ambrosia her whole journey and is still with her. Ambrosia found her perfect town. Called Lin'sulan. She loves her town. Ambrosia is now 36 and still lives in Lin'sulan. She has her home and is very happy with her decision. But, she still wants to travel all around the world and find Laurley. Ambrosia misses Laurley so dearly and soon wants to meet up with her again, maybe she can stick along with Ambrosia. Ambrosia  wants to end up happily at the Grand Kingdom of Urguan. She still watches the sunrise and the moon pass by. Ambrosia counts the days as they pass by, eagerly waiting for the perfect day to start a move on her journey again. Otto just goes along with her, he goes wherever Ambrosia goes. Ambrosia also plays little concert like things in Lin'sulan with her guitar. She makes some money doing this. She also loves going out into the forest with Otto. She has a trail with paper targets on trees she uses to practice using her bow. She's gotten better with archery over the years. Ambrosia is hoping to start a family in a couple of years. Maybe find true love? 

 

The End!

 

 

Personality Traits: Like to show girls are better then boys. Ambrosia likes when people believe and help others. She dislikes when boys doubt girls and aren't helpful. She's also loyal, honest, clumsy, curious, funny, weird, and smart! Oh and loves to play music on her guitar.

 

Ambitions: One of the best archery woman of them all. Find Laurley again. A famous guitarist, and be one of the strongest dwarf of them all! Oh, and live in the Grand Kingdom of Urguan.

 

Strengths/Talents: playing guitar, helping animals, building, selling, and archery.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Needs to work on fighting people (pvp/attacking)

 

Appearance: Ambrosia has light brown hair with gold streaks hair she has long hair, likes to wear hunting clothes, has couple scars on arms and 1 scar across her eye, she is very short for her age, and wears a necklace.

 

~RosySnapper

 

PS: I couldn't get a screenshot on my skin in game because it was to big. Sorry!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

 

Greetings, applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your application is poorly formatted. Please only include your application, and nothing else in the thread;
• Your biography is too informal, and is written in a story form. It has too many moments where your character acts like a modern high schooler rather than a 30 year old forest dwarf. I would recommend taking a look at the past accepted applicants' biographies to get a more clear idea on how to write the part;
• Your application contains numerous spelling and grammatical errors, please have one final check before submitting it next time;
• Your application suggests that your character was born in the 1990's, which is unlikely, since the current year of the server is 1572;
• Your definitions for powergaming and metagaming are incorrect. You may use the thread below to gain more information about them. However, please do NOT copy and paste them onto your application, as the AT would love to hear them from your own words;
• "Showing girls are better than boys" is not an appropriate aspiration, please think of another reason why your character might do with their life;
• Your character's strengths are many, while the weaknesses they have is a single one. Please be more humble with your character's skills and weaknesses;
• PvP is not an appropriate weakness in the Lord of the Craft, as the server is an RP dominant one;
• Your character's weaknesses and strengths are vague, and only contain physical ones. The Application Team encourages applicants to develop their character's attributes in more than a single dimension. The way you can achieve this is to add strengths and weaknesses that are beyond physicality. A few examples to this would be: being impatient, being cold-blooded, having a short-temper et cetera;
• "East" is not a timezone, you can learn which timezone you're in using this website: http://www.timeanddate.com/time/map/
• I believe that you have not fully grasped the formality of the server, from the amount of informal aspects in your application (Using multiple exclamation marks in parts, the "Oh and..." parts in your bio, strenghts, weaknesses and aspirations and the general language you have used in the application.). I would like to remind you that the Lord of the Craft is a serious, formal roleplaying server. There are no room for Out of Character ruses, as they may even result in a ban, the way players type is with perfect grammar and spelling, and the necessary punctuation that is needed. Is is not all-serious, as the server is quite fun, and makes those who play it laugh often. However, a certain level of seriousness is set, and there is no room for jokes and informality in roleplay. I fail to believe that you will fit in the server with this behavior, please write your application in a more formal manner, you may contact me anytime you'd like to for any questions you have.

 You may re-apply after waiting for 24 hours.

 

Please do not hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs for any questions or concerns you have regarding the application procedure. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.