application [✗] [Pending] application

[shellfire 2]

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:shellfiregaming

How old are you?:12

What timezone are you in?:(utc+01:00)stockholm

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes i am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no metagaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: my friend

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):i have not done this before

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):yes

 

 

Definitions

 

 

What is roleplaying?:roleplaing is where you put your self in to the position of fictional or non fictional character

What is metagaming?:metagaming is where you use knowledge your character does not have yet in roleplay

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:powergaming is where you do what ever you want in roleplay having no regard for other roleplayers and do what ever you want in roleplay having no regard for other roleplayers, this will ruin the expirience for others player too

Character’s name: simon

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race:human highlander

Character’s age: 26

Biography :Simon was born in 1545 and raised in the mountains of savory, in the year 1550 he started to be trained as a assassin and by 1555 when he was 10 he was able to sneak out of town without being seen at all, in 1547 when simon was 2 The Empire of Vanderguan splintered and collapsed after mere months, this was enough to make his family be more careful to prevent their family from being attacked for being assassin for hire and just a few years before that his family were becoming paranoid before in 1541 When the victory at Hiebenhold 2.0, the Orenian forces laying siege on the last dwarven hold of Urguan on Avar happened and in 1540 the defeat at Khro'Nogaak took place, although all of this took place his family never stopped being assassins.

Personality Traits:stealthy,  does not like to help too much ,he is carefull about other people

Ambitions: he wants to be an assassin for hire

Strengths/Talents: stealth , backstabbing , being fast

Weaknesses/Inabilities: stealth in the day, trust issues ,too hasty

Appearance: red Eyes ,Brown hair ,gray red and Brown clothes

Skin:

[SpiltMemes 368]

 

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Your application has been put on [PENDING]

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You do not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

• Your application as a whole is lathered with typos and spelling errors. Please skim through and make fixes to these errors! (Especially in your definitions where you are missing a few words or repeat the definition twice.)
• Though carrying enough server lore, your biography is very lacking and does not tell us much about your character. Biography length at least should be two paragraphs long. Lengthen yours, perhaps include things such as; who were his parents? Where was he born specifically? In what region? How did his peers treat him? Et cetera.
• Making oneself an assassin for hire is extremely cliche. We ask that you please make the suitable adjustments to your character so that your character is not overused, and overseen.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

 

[SpiltMemes 368]

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Applicant failed to correct errors noted during PENDING stage.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours.

[SpiltMemes 368]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.