[✗] Application to play

[phantomarttheif 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Renagades

How old are you?: 18

What timezone are you in?: pacific

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: making sure you understand the rules

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: http://minecraftservers.org/type/roleplay/2

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes

 

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Shadow

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) High Elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.

shadow was born deep in the woods of courland with his parents and older sister. one day as shadow and his family were out in the fields gathering crops with some villagers a battalion of orcs came by ravaging the land and destroying everything in there path. Shadows mom and dad had hidden shadow in an hidden underground bunker where they would normally store there crops and treasures. shadows mom, dad and sister along with a few warriors tried to fight back with any weapon they could find, but through all there efforts the orcs had overpowered them and destroyed everything. two days had passed and shadow had gotten curious if everything was fine because he had no longer heard any noises coming from the outside. As soon as shadow open the hidden doors he had saw what no 9 year old boy should ever see he saw the corpses and blood of his friends and family everywhere. with this shadow had felt helpless as he couldn't have done anything to protect his family and friends he then started train with the art of swordsmanship and close combat to strengthen his body.

9 years had passed by and shadow has been to many to many small villages near felsan and lorraine defending them from many goblin attacks and small raid parties from orcs. he had trained himself to live by the way of the sword and to protect anyone in need, but due to this it had also made him not be able to trust anyone completely.  he has now on the path of revenge making sure that he destroys any orc he sees so he can avenge his family. he is currently on the road to savoy to get resources for his next hunt and possible information to where he can find the orc king.

Year: (dont know what year it is in the server but what ever year it is minus 18 years so my character will be 18)

 

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Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) strong attitude , Cold hearted at times because he doesn't know how to express his emotions, calm during horrendous situations, mature, thinks about his friends if he ever has one, can be deadly when friends are in danger or comrads, quiet and always aware of his surroundings.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) To become strong enough to protect the ones he love

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) excels in Duel wielding, writing, using logic to escape most battles and fights, excels in blending in with his surroundings.
Weaknesses: showing his emotions, trusting other people

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) archery, social skills

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Long black hair down to his neck,His eyes are the color of silver, his physical body is well muscular, always wears a mask that covers there bottom half of face, he always wears a moon crescent necklace the color of silver, he wears a silver t-shirt, black combat pants and boots

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) http://s1249.photobucket.com/user/Renagades/media/2016-09-21_16.17.33_zpsjhldcn70.png.html

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

 

-You failed to include a significant portion of the application format. 

 

-Having one's parents/family killed by orcs, vowing revenge, and than living a life of violence because of such is cliche to a unfathomably degree. If you wish for your character's parents to die randomly, provide a different reason.

 

-Your character's biography is poorly written, and incoherent in many areas.

 

-Your character's biography is strewn with typos and errors.

 

-Your minecraft skin is not suitable for a high elf, both because a high elf is standardly pale with very light hair, likewise, your charcter seems to have animal ears usuitable for an elf in general, and very modern clothes not suitable for the fantasy-medieval setting of Lord of The Craft.

 

-Your character's skills and weaknesses are heavily unbalanced.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.