[✗] Application

[Greenmangaming 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Greenmangaming

How old are you?: 14

What timezone are you in?: (UTC-06:00) Central Time (US & Canada)

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The Structure rule because floating objects are annoying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friend Talavok

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

What is roleplaying?: To act as someone else not knowing anything that character doesn't know

What is metagaming?: Using false knowledge

What is power-emoting (power gaming)?: Being overpowered in Role play or skipping steps in role play and not giving others a chance to do anything

 

Character’s name: Tristen Brairwood

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 18

Biography : When Tristen was born into Felsen his mom died giving birth to him and so he was stuck with his dad, but when he was six his dad died in battle so he was forced in to a foster home but he did not like that so ran away living on the streets. Growing up was hard for Tristen since he had no family he could so he spent his free time exploring the city and often looking for any way to steal food and often as he would fail in the process and have to run hoping to not be caught. At the age of fifteen Tristen had started to hunt simple game like Rabbit and other small animals but still liked to steal from others as a game and get rid of the stuff he stole not knowing if it had any value . Tristen also enjoyed messing with the guards of the city often making them mad and he ends up being chased by them.

 

 

Personality Traits: Tristen Likes to hunt, mine, farm , and adventure but dislikes enclosed spaces, orcs, and people who break laws (he is a bit adventurous in activities)

Ambitions: My character wants to be a person someone can look up too

Strengths/Talents: Coming up with plans, Helping out with recourse gathering, and fighting

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Being more open to others around him

Appearance: Tristen is a 6 foot brown haired guy with grayish-blue eyes

Skin:

[Argontum 153]

Greetings applicant;

Your application has been denied, but do not fret! This does not mean the end. The reason for this denial would be the inability of your application to meet up to our standards. If you follow and complete the changes I lay out for you, your next application might get accepted!

• Biography is one of the most important parts of your application, as it gives the Application Team a chance to get to know your character! We would like to learn about what they went through, how they viewed events that happened to them, what changed their views on things, et cetera. Your biography is vague and short. Please write at least two lengthy paragraphs of well written biography;

• Your character's aspirations and weaknesses are vague and one-dimensioned. The Application Team encourages applicants to develop their character in more than one way, also beyond physicality. A few examples would be: having a short-temper, being patient, being cold-blooded et cetera;

• Your biography contains not enough server lore, where it needs to contain at least three. Please seek the link below to get relevant pieces in your biography; https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
• Your definitions of metagaming is vague. You may learn more about the definitions from the link below. However, DO NOT copy and paste the definitions as the Application Team would love to hear them from your own words. 

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours from the point of this denial.

Do not hesitate to contact me if you need help or have any questions.

[Argontum 153]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.