[✗] [Pending] WhiteLightning's Application

[WhiteLightning 0]

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: WhiteLightning

How old are you?: 16

What timezone are you in?: EST

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Excessive trolling or use of 'memes' in roleplay are disallowed. I can not tell you how annoying it is to see this IRP.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: JKBizcuts

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Putting yourself into anothers shoes.

What is metagaming?: Using Ooc info Icly

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Forcing actions upon another persons character

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Gunnar Hakon

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human, Highlander

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 22

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Born in the Frozen North, Gunnar Hakon was a hardy sort. He was raised around farming, and grew to resent the South over time. His father fought during the 18 year war. He learned at an early age to read, by walking to the local Chapel, and studying there. Gunnar trained in fighting under his father, as well. Usually with a one handed weapon and a round shield, the most used weapons in his village, to learn how to protect himself.

 

                  Later in life, Gunnar Hakon journeyed out to find his own place in the world, touring the south, and many other Kingdoms. He passed through Lorraine, and other duchies on his travels. Finding the South distasteful, he returned to the North, searching for a new home....

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Xenophobic, scruffy, and Stubborn.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) A knight/nobleman

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) He is good at manual labor, and close combat fighting.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Self-control, and Archery

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Red hair, long red beard, green eyes and a blue leather coat over a warm wool tunic, with sturdy leather boots. He'd have broad shoulders, and would be well muscled, standing at about 6'1.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

http://prntscr.com/cvm4kl

 

[Fireheart 2777]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 12 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

 

Please include at least one more piece of Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for humans can be found on the Wiki ( https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

 

Please lengthen your Biography out to a longer length. I am looking for around the size of two paragraphs. As an idea incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character’s development to their current standpoint.

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 6/12/24 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make (all) requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

 

[Fireheart 2777]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.