nordak's application

[appleman 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:moldyappleman

-How old are you?:i am 18

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United States eastern time zone

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes very fluent

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm just starting college at a local community college hoping to transfer up. I'm looking forward to playing this after watching a few youtube videos.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:it varies depending on how busy i am but if i really enjoy this i will probably be around pretty regularly.

-How long have you played minecraft?:about a year and a half

-What do you know about roleplaying?:yes it involves making a fantasy character and acting as that character in the world

-What do you expect this server will be like?:looking at some of the videos and the map of aegis I'm absolutely blown away i think it will be interesting to say the least.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:i haven't played on many servers once i actually bought minecraft but i was a pretty active builder on some of the free minecraft servers

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes i have

-Name the 4 races on this server:orc,human,elf,dwarf also ascended/undead are kind of a sub race or noble race

-How did you hear about us?:your trailer on YouTube and i watched a couple lets plays of the server as well

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:moldyappleman

In-Character:

-Character Name:Nordak Warstout

-What is your Race?:Dwarf

-Biography:raised in Kal’Urguan nordak was a happy dwarf with a loving family. his father a prestigious miner wielding a diamond pickaxe made a hefty sum of money to support his family. his mother a barmaid was very cheerful and popular with the customers. one day as his parents went out of the the city to celebrate their 13 year honeymoon at their favorite pub in another settlement but, on their way there they were killed by undead on their way to attack a settlement. When nordak got the news he was devastated and vowed to become a powerful warrior to join the crusade against the undead menace.since then he has trained to become a powerful warrior and has done odd jobs and mining to remain financially afloat.

-Character Age:25

-Character Appearance:red haired with a beard going down his chest with all black on (will post a link with picture)

-Character Personality:stern but kind like most dwarves he has a short temper but as long as you are good to him he will be good to you

-Your ambitions:to become a leader against the undead menace.

-Can your character read or write?:yes

-Can your character mine?:yes of coarse

-Are you a capable builder?:i don't have much building experience but i think i can build at least reasonably well

-Can you wield a sword?:yes

-Enjoy Farming?:only on a necessity basis (I'm assuming you mean farming as in planting crops rather than accumulating mass amounts of items)

-Does your character have any special skills?:none in particular very well rounded for a dwarf

-A screenshot of your skin:my LOTC skin

-Other Information:hates cows with a burning passion

[Maiavel 17]

Denied.

Your biography could use a bit more in the way of character development and depth. Perhaps you could add another few decades into his story, and age, to explain this hatred towards cows o.O.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.