[✗] [Pending] second application

[KTSOG_YT 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: KTSOG_YT
What timezone are you in?: GMT
How old are you?: 15
Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? :yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: To be conscious of other peoples feelings
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? : no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Youtube 
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P3AMm0f25d0&t=157s
Have you logged into the server yet? : Yes
 
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!
 
What is roleplaying?: It is basicly acting out a story that you have in mind or in a script 
What is metagaming?: Is a type of rule set in a game while you are roleplaying 
What is power-emoting?: it is a type of interaction used in games.
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Kevin Firran
Character’s sex: male
Character’s race: Kha'Cheetrah (basicly Kharajyr but cheetah)
Character’s age: 18
Biography: Kevin is an 18 year old Kha'Cheetrah who ran away from home when he was 8 after a war between two kharyjyr clans and has been stealing food to survive for 5 years of his life and then a man took him in. after 2 years he became a novice thief and then the man who took him in died by a magic user, kevin was so depress that he locked him self in a room running around for a month and then he became when back to being a thief and stealling for survival, after two years he found a girl that he liked and has been flirting as a husband and he got stabbed in the leg and survived. Then he realisted after a year that he wanted to learn a little magic and to become an assassin and here he is today
Personality Traits: He has a habit of running around and for licking his fur, he hates water and he likes all races. (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)
Ambitions: He wants to be part of a family and become a assassin and magic user  (what does your character aspire to be?)
Strengths/Talents:He is super fast and agile, runs at prey at high speeds, sharp claws and teeth (what is your character really, really good at?)
Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is shy around girls of all races exept dwarfs, he is weak, and he hates water  (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)
Appearance: he has orange fur with black spots like a cheetah he is 6:3 he is a good looking cat, he has a scar on his left leg (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)
Skin: 
 

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

Claimed.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Pending ---

 

Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reasons:

- Although your definitions are not plagiarized some of them are still incorrect. Try looking around the LotC Wiki for some help.

- I'd like to see your name for your character change because Kevin isn't very fitting of a Kha.

- I need to see more server lore on your application (which can also be found on the LotC Wiki)

- I'd Like to see some context as to why your character aspires to become an assassin.

- Also I'd like to let you know that Kha are unable to breed with other races so having a serious relationship with any dwarves, humans, elves, orcs, halflings, etc...

 

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You do not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- Denied for failing to make the needed corrections.

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.