[Denied]Matthias Leone Application

[Mathias_Leone 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

Madmatt09

-How old are you?:

15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Canada, Mountain Time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a kid who plays guitar and listens to Death Metal, but also loves games. Especially Role Play. That pretty much sums me up.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Depends on the week, really. on a good week, i could probably be on maybe a good 15 hours. Bad weeks could be from 0-7 hours. All confusing, i know.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

About 6 months at least...

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

Im more of a roleplayer for Medieval times. I use extensive grammar on my charecter. Ive been roleplaying scince i was very young (like... maybe 6 or 7... Yeah im a loser T_T)

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

Im hoping it'll be a really clean server where everyone is just Roleplaying... not Flaming or Trolling, but just enjoying being their own created charecter.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I did play on Mutiny Craft. Its a neat server, but it gets really boring... i want something with a new adventure every day when i log on. This server sounds interesting, so ill give it a go.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

Yes i have read and agreed to the rules. The lore interests me, and i think that Aegis will be a great experience for me.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Humans, Orcs, Elves and Dwarves

-How did you hear about us?:

I saw the Commercial thing on youtube, and it was outstanding!

-Did you vote?:

Yes

-What was your favourite Law?:

Definately the Discrimination Rule... I hate it when good roleplayers are left out.

-What was your least favourite Law?:

I dont HATE any laws, but the law that says you cant return to your death point for 30 minutes doesnt really make sense to me... Ill follow the rule, but if possible, id like an understanding of why this was put.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

Madmatt09

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Matthias Leonè (Matt) (this isnt my real full name...)

-What is your Race?:

Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

Madmatt09 (Over-used? Yes... but i can remember it)

-Biography:

Came to the Great Kingdom of Oren for a new life. When Matthias was just a boy, his parents abandoned him, and left him with a man living on a mountain. Now he is a man, seeking to use his skills he learned from the Mountain Man.

-Character Age:

20

-Character Appearance:

Nothing like a knight or a necro. Just plain clothes worn by mere commoners.

-Character Personality:

Can be bright and joyful, but can get really annoyed and angry fairly easily. He enjoys being alone, but wont hesitate to talk to anyone.

-Your ambitions:

To live a successful and happy life, no matter where his future takes him.

-Can your character read or write?:

He can read very well, but he cannot write.

-Can your character mine?:

Yes

-Are you a capable builder?

Simple and small buildings. Nothing too fancy. But can build great basements for homes, or even an underground home in itself!

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes. Quite well.

-Enjoy Farming?:

Yes.

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

Mining, Swordsmanship, and farming all do very well, but Blacksmithing is my great skill.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information:

Nothing much different about your average man. Doesnt see himself as a villain, but not as a hero either.

Thank you for giving me the oppertunity to be able to roleplay again :) I will have fun on this server

[Respiren 524]

[Mathias_Leone 0]

Why was i denied? Is there something wrong with the sheet?

[Bbstorm 13]

I think you need to go into a lot more detail on a lot of the questions, like the roleplaying one you need to define roleplay how you understand it. Your Biography is also way too short which is always a problem.

All in all you should go back and put a lot more effort into the application before you re-submit it. Also, make sure you dont re-submit it too soon.

[Mathias_Leone 0]

I think you need to go into a lot more detail on a lot of the questions, like the roleplaying one you need to define roleplay how you understand it. Your Biography is also way too short which is always a problem.

All in all you should go back and put a lot more effort into the application before you re-submit it. Also, make sure you dont re-submit it too soon.

Alright. Ill take a look at it then. Thanks