[✗] [Pending] s6211 Application

[s6211 4]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: s6211

What timezone are you in?: GMT

How old are you?: 18

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Power-Gaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Referral from a friend

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): 

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or use our wiki definitions as a reference, but make sure that you write them in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is Roleplaying?: Roleplay is when you act as someone you aren't and speak as a Character who you take the life of and play as.

What is Metagaming?: When Someone uses information they got from OOC chat or MSG and uses it in RP.

What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?: When someone emotes something such as *Kills* and they didn't hurt the other person at all.

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play:

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called): Thrór Grandaxe

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Dwarf

Character’s age: 100

Biography  (This is one of the most important sections of the application. Please take your time and make it a decent paragraph long. Read up on your character's race and be sure to add at least one accurate reference from the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.): Born as the bastard son of Astmar Grandaxe, he was raised in the city of Kal'Nikaer living only with his mother. She brought him up alone with barely enough mina to support herself but to her effort he became a strong and independant Dwed. He was unlike many other Dwarves in that he was not fond of using swords, shields and axes but instead took an interest in Archery. He took up hunting as a hobby and became very good at it, He became quite the hero on his poor little street as he would return with meats to help keep everyone fed during the harsh winters. Although during one long hunt in the midst of the Deep Cold Thrór became trapped in a cave in while following a wolf, his leg was crushed by the falling rocks and was left with no other option but to cut it off at the knee. He had managed to crawl to his camp and burn the wound closed howling at the sky for none but the animals to hear. Upon his arrival to the capital his mother had him rushed to the Runesmiths pleading them to help her son, offering up every possession she had to them. They agreed and so aided Thrór by using Runes to join steel limb to his knee to allow him to walk again.

This act had cost his mother everything and they struggled to survive for years until during the Frostbeard Rebellion Thrór's mother fell ill and he was unable to help her. He struggled to do anything to save her until one night she passed away in his arms, Thrór took the death of his mother extremely hard and so began in a downward spiral to spend both days and nights drinking away his sorrows in the city tavern. It was only due to the constant flow of Clan members in and out of the tavern that when a posse of Grandaxes flooded the tavern, Thrór snook out of his drunken slumber and eavesdropped on their conversation of the battles they had fought and admired their brotherhood. Thrór was missing this in his life and so acting on that and the desire to find his father he strook out alone with nothing but his bow and aimed to find a clan and make a name for himself.

 

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?): Fond of a drink,  interest in Archery

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?): A respected and powerful Dwed to get approval of his Father

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?): Proficient at Archery and Fletching

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?):, Undertrained with swords and axes

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?): 4ft tall with wooden leg, Tanned in complexion, black hair, clean shaven 

[MrMineLoveDude 299]

Hey there s6221! Your application is well written and for the most part done well, with the exception of a few but minor mistakes. However, they can be fixed with a couple of tweaks and you’ll be set for being accepted onto the server!

 

Your Application has been put on Pending for the following reason(s):

• Biography | In your biography, you still mention the prosthetic runesmith leg, please make that edit. And also explain how Thror got his wooden leg that you mentioned in the persona's appearance. Remember, the leg will not be able to move due to it being wooden. In my opinion, I feel like it'll be easier on your part to start roleplay Thror with a missing leg and move on from there. It provides interesting roleplay and allows for both the option to get a runesmith leg or a wooden one!

 

And remember, there's no need to make another application, you can simply edit it by reading the instructions below.

 

With that, you have 24 hours to make the necessary changes needed. Failing to make these changes within the allotted time will return in an automatic denial, though upon request I’ll be able to grant more time for your corrections.No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! If you ever find yourself having trouble, there are many resourceful locations to retrieve useful information such as the forums and wiki. Other resources will be left below as well!

 

If you have any questions or concerns regarding the application, do not hesitate to contact me through the forums. Simply click my forum name and locate the ‘Message’ button to get started! And don’t forget once you’ve made the corrections, send a message via the forums.

[MrMineLoveDude 299]

Unfortunately you’ve failed to meet the needed requirements for your application.

 

Your Application has been denied for the following reason(s):

• The verdict is being determined on another application. The applicant failed to edit this post and posted an entirely different post for their edits.

 

Do not fear, this simply means the corrections were not made to the application or were not fully met. As always, if you have any further questions or need assistance, make sure to send a message through the forums. se take your time to correct and improve on the your application before re-applying to LoTC in 1 hour, as we will only review up to 5 applications in the calendar month. Good Luck!

[MrMineLoveDude 299]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.