My server Application

[omaliey 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Omaliey

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: -10 Australia

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I like alot of sports but i am realy into minecraft and lots of role-playing games like fallout 3, world of warcraft, Elder Scrolls and dungens and dragons.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 2-4 hours a day.

-How long have you played minecraft?: About 1 year.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: Role-playing is when you act as the charater would.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A amazing envinroment with a great community.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on my friends server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i have read it a couple of times, I also read the forum post on minecraftforums.net

-Name the 4 races on this server: Orc, Human, Dwarf, and Elves.

-How did you hear about us?:I saw the new Trailer you guys made on youtube. And also my friend plays on the server so he had recommended it to me.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: omaliey

In-Character:

-Character Name: Burke

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: Burke was born into a family of knights. His father was murded in his sleep. When burke was only a buy of 8 but before his father died burke was taught how to wield a blade. When burke's father died Burke swore that he would kill the man who killed his father

-Character Age: 36

-Character Appearance: he has a long bushy beard and has green eyes and is heavily armored.

-Character Personality: when wars is abroud he brings out the rage in him and fight for what is right but when war is not abroud he is nice and very well mannered.

-Your ambitions: he wants to become a very powerful knight.

-Can your character read or write?: yes very well.

-Can your character mine?: yes very well

-Are you a capable builder?: yes but not megastructers

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, His ideal profession is to be a knight

-Enjoy Farming?: no he is very unpatint

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, He is great in the art of swordsmanship.

-A screenshot of your skin: skin is the Attachment

-Other Information:

[Maiavel 17]

Denied.

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