Re-edit of LROWNAGE's application

[Rom 59]

Posted Today, 02:47 PM

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

-How old are you?:13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:UK

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes, but I'm still at school.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I play Minecraft a lot and can contribute well to the server. I am mainly a miner, but can defend myself well if needed, and can build quite well.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:3 times a week at least.

-How long have you played minecraft?:About 3 or 4 months

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:This is my first RP server and it looks extremely fun and I am sure I could keep up with the Law and Lore. I know what roleplaying is and can keep in character easily and know how the Dwarf race speak, act and behave. I will be polite and respectful towards other players and act as if I were a true dwarf in the land of Aegis.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I have seen videos of it on YouTube and it looks like a place that I will like to be. I am sure that I will enjoy the experience and can learn more about roleplaying and perfect my skills.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on a couple of random servers and have gotten on well with other players, but this is the first server I will stick to for a while.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:I have agreed to the rules and I think I agree with the Lore.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Humans, Dwarves, Orcs and Elves.

-How did you hear about us?:I saw a trailer on YouTube a while ago and have been addicted to watching videos of it ever since.

-Did you vote?:Yes, I did.

-What was your favourite Law?:That you cannot steal or destroy other's items. I have been griefed many times.

-What was your least favourite Law?:Having to pay for things, I like freebies :)

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?LROWNAGE, the same as my Minecraft name.

In-Character:

-Character Name:Redwood

-What is your Race?:Dwarf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:LROWNAGE

-Biography:I was born in the caves of the Secret Mountains, only to be kidnapped by Orcs and kept prisoner for many years. Having learned their fighting techniques and their speech I escaped to teach others what I knew. My personality is that I am a kind and helpful dwarf, but when faced with battle I am not afraid to defend myself. I love to mine and build things, but also excite at the sound of a battle. I will defend the Dwarven nation until he very end.

-Character Age:20

-Character Appearance:Light-coloured beard, muscular build and a scarred but handsome face.

-Character Personality:I despise Orcs and am not too friendly with Elves, but I am a great friend of Humans.

-Your ambitions:To make a merchant shop and be known throughout Aegis as the number 1 merchant. Also to eventually become an Ascended and live in the beautiful land that is Haven.

-Can your character read or write?:Yes, I was taught by a human tutor.

-Can your character mine?:Extremely well.

-Are you a capable builder?Yes.

-Can you wield a sword?:Quite well, yes.

-Enjoy Farming?:Its alright.

-Does your character have any special skills?:I can find my way, even when in the barren desert at night.

-A screenshot of your skin:It's the attatched file.Attached Image: 2011-09-21_15.38.56.png

-Other Information:Nothing really. I will contribute to the server and help others with problems, in and out of character.

[Blaedr 42]

Denied.

Reasons why your application has been denied may include the following:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.