RAF802's application

[RAF802 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: raf802

-How old are you?: 17

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT +0 London.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a student at college who likes to casually play video games to relax. I am also a team player and always think of what to do to better others.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 4-10 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since December last year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: i know that i have to act as and through a character and not long

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Very well developed and managed. I believe this server will last as long as Minecraft does!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: My own and friends' private servers. I still mess about on them. Also, one of the Yogcasts' public servers; i left it as you couldnt really do much and there was tremendous lag.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes I have.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, Elf, Orc, Dwarf

-How did you hear about us?: Jesse Cox

-Did you vote?: Yes.

-What was your favourite Law?: You must keep in character

-What was your least favourite Law?: Theft is permitted in moderate amounts

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? RAF802

In-Character:

-Character Name: Neomer

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: raf802

-Biography: Since Neomer was only 3 years old he was forced to join the local militia where he was first taught how to craft and use a bow. After spending several years in the militia Neomer wanting something different, so he abandoned the militia and went into the mountains to live with the Dwarfs. Odd how this sounds, one Dwarf, a rich miner, accepted Neomer as his apprentice to work and live with him. A few days before Neomer was due to leave the kind Dwarf and his family, Neomer got a note from a messenger that his family and town were under attack from some rogue Orcs. Neomer left immediately and followed the messenger home. When he arrived he noticed that the once dense forest, was cleared and turned into the Orcs' camp. He saw from across the clearing that the town's militia was making ready for an attack on the camp. A Neomer was on the other side of the camp, he could see the orcs' true numbers and knew that the militia would not win. But before he could warn them they had already begun the assault... A week later Neomer found his father's old cloak in a ditch at the abandoned camp. He put it on and swore to the Gods that he would avenge his family and town.

-Character Age: 19

-Character Appearance: Long black hair, emerald green eyes, 7' tall, scar on mouth.

-Character Personality: Very Mysterious and generous. He will aid those who need it most.

-Your ambitions: To avenge my family and townsfolk. To one day, rid the forest of evil.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes. He often notes down any changes to the ancient lands of Aegis or enemys' camp locations.

-Can your character mine?: He spent a year as an apprentice of a master Dwarven miner when he was very young

-Are you a capable builder? He can build only basic structures like a temporary shack to keep him dry in the rain.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, he is a strong swordsman and a swift archer. He prefers the bow.

-Enjoy Farming?: No, he does not believe in clearing the land for crops.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Unless he wants it, he cannot be seen or heard most of the time.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/822/sketch1h.png

-Other Information: None.

[Maiavel 17]

Denied.

First off, your character skin picture is inadequate. You need to place an actual image of your character. This can be done by taking a screenshot in game, or loading up your skin on minersneedcoolshoes.com

Secondly, your biography was lacking and could use a bit more depth, and development.

Finally, children at the age of 3 do NOT join the military. Elves are considered babies/children/minors/young/etc. until they're 150+, and even at this point it's the same as an 18 year old human attempting to make their way as an adult.

Take these things into consideration, and polish your application before resubmitting.