Tharor or "The Lune's" application (revised and explained)

[Tharor 0]

This has been edited because of understanding issues with the moderator who originally reviewed this application. He didn't get the point I was getting at in my character, and why it wasn't written in first-person. Unless the original reviewer is reading this application again.

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Tharor

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: EST, or -5 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I'd think so, although, all of us make a grammatical of spelling error every once-in-awhile.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Let's see... I'm in school on weekdays from 7:20AM-4:00PM. THAT DOESN'T INCLUDE HOMEWORK. I have fencing on Mondays, so I will have little to no time to RP then. I do go on occasional vacations (without my laptop), so that's usually the cause if I'm not there besides homework. I do enjoy roleplaying, I really do, it's like a haven after a chaotic day in my life.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: On average, erm... probably 20 hours or so, depending on: how much time I had that Monday, homework amount, a test or project or vacations.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since 1.5 I think.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I love roleplaying, it's definition to me is to make character, then set him free. It's like the character makes his own way through life, and you're the observing specter. My main roleplaying type is fantasy of sci-fi, much like this server.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect to be as exciting the youtube trailers suggest.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Eh, only un-satisfying community servers. I left them because they bored me too easily.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have agreed to the rules/server law, and I greatly admire the lore and backstory.

-Name the 4 races on this server. The races are as follows: Elf, Human, Orc and Dwarf (and their respective sub-races[Not including Aengul, Daemon, Ascended or Undead. As they are given as an in-game bonuses to whom moderators deem worthy]).

-How did you hear about us?: Through the stunning advertisements on Youtube.

-Did you vote?: Of course, I'd love to see LOTC get widespread attention

-What was your favourite Law?: All of them, I think them fair enough.

-What was your least favourite Law?: I can't say I like all of them and have have a least favorite now, can I?

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Tharor

In-Character:

("Luneatic" is spin off of "Lunatic." Relating to being insane towards the moon)

CHARACTER FOREWORD:

Supposed reasons why I wasn't accepted orgininally:

-Lore not tied into bio

-bad spelling

-overuse of brackets (outrageous, that's irrelevant!)

-not in first-person (Will be explained below)

Before you read, understand that "Luneatic" is a term I made, NOT a misspelling, which is what the original reviewer thought. The reason my bio isn't written in first-person, is because the character is well... CRAZY. Furthermore, if I was writing through a crazy (or rather "Luneatic's" as according to his bio) person's eyes, HE wouldn't think he's crazy! He'd probably think he's the SANE one! Of course, I'd have to role play through his eyes but it's easier in-game than Tharor describing himself in an auto-biography. I've never played an eccentric/insane character before, so it'll be a good way that I can locate the extent of my role playing ability.

The last problem was lore; I know the lore, but he's loony! He doesn't have need knowing the formal lore, he can acknowledge the origins of Aegis but he only respects the moon, thus him being called "The Lune" instead of "The Loon." I know the lore, I respect it! HE IS NOT ME, that's the point of an RPG!!

I hope you understand, I do not want to go through the process of being repeatedly buried so please understand. I wasn't expecting such critics for such specific things. Applications should be reviewed mainly for content and creative ability, not for: grammar, spelling or things irrelevant to role playing(like bracket usage). It's their fault if one looks like a fool because he types something wrong or responds in the incorrect way! (End of character foreword)

-Character Name: ("The Lune") Tharor

-What is your Race?: Elf, High-Elf subrace.

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Tharor (non-number names are versatile, no?).

-Biography: Tharor was brought into this world by two nameless, believed to be nomadic, High-Elves. His parents apparently abandoned him in the village square, and a note that included his name and race. He was found by a band of travelling eccentrics (his parent may also been a bit crazy as well, naming him "Tharor") who weren't really classified as "normal." ***** as they were, they still asked permission from the Elven council to take him in, and raised him as a traveler or (MAYBE?) future Ambassador so that he could return to them with grand stories from his treks. As being raised by eccentrics, he developed his own queerness... He believes the moon to be the most beautiful thing in all of Aegis, even going so far as to stare at it at night for hours.

15 years later, he is sent on his way with only 1 set of very fine clothing that would last for a (Elven) lifetime, his guardians didn't care much for money, as they lived a traveling life, so after buying the suit they gave him any leftover to aid him (And they thought a some nice clothes would give better impressions on people offering jobs). Being "in love" with the moon, he adapted to his unusual habits by turning nocturnal, sleeping at day and traveling by night. He enjoys odd jobs that folks in the villages that he passes by give him, for he never stays at one place for more than 2 days and uses the money to buy food or seek shelter in the inns.

Currently, he travels to Kal Urguan as the first major stop of his travels. Although, he IS reluctant to be underground for quite so long. He travels by coast when possible, for the moon's ties with water.

(Summary: An Eccentric High-Elf who is adamant on his beliefs on the moon. [Could be a potential threat to certain individuals, if they try to undermine his belief he may get angry. Or potential magnet for followers, if some are also "lune" for the moon{Who knows? his story has only just begun!}])

-Character Age: 15 years old (Incredibly young for an Elf [i know, same age. But, I'll have a good basis for his emotion that way])

-Character Appearance: Pale, wears a suit and matching cap and keeps his face covered by his coat-collar. (He actually genuinely covered his face for fashion, the only thing vaguely Un-Eccentric about him)

-Character Personality: Distant, eccentric. (His nickname among his community "is" [quotations because no one else but me and you {the reader} would know this] "The Lune" Tharor)

-Your ambitions: His current ambition is to travel all of Aegis, and to settle in an secluded open-roofed house or as a traveling merchant or story-teller. He wants the religous people to regard the moon as holy (Not to such of a degree like the Lunites in FF). To understand why people stare at him funnily... Oh yeah, and to of course go to the moon, although he knows it's unrealistic

-Can your character read or write?: As his guardians had the grand idea of him becoming an Ambassador, they taught him literacy (Not that's what he wants)

-Can your character mine?: No, he doesn't like to be separated from the moon (and he is a bit afraid of tight-spaces). His build is for agility and speed.

-Are you a capable builder? His buildings are usually open-roofed for the moonlight, so they aren't desirable among other races. if they replaced the space with glass it may be fashionable. (That is in-character, I can build according to codes if required)

-Can you wield a sword?: Traveling isn't the safest of occupations, so he's been formally trained, but he is nothing compared to trained military officials. He uses the quick light swords (Rapier or Epee [only in RP since the swords are the same model...]) and prefers to jab instead of slice (like fencing).

-Enjoy Farming?: As long as he can see the moon (so NO cave-farming). Also, he enjoys fishing and seafood.

-Does your character have any special skills?:] Story-telling somewhat, although he won't get much of an audience because of his habit of sleeping during daylight.

-A screenshot of your skin: I'm not good with the inserting of pictures, so the screenshot is my profile picture (if the attachment didn't show up) (His guardians also desinged the suit, making it unique to Aegis) If I tried to add the pointy ears (and I wanted too!) it would interfere with his hat, sorry if that displeases you. (High-elves love to refine their elegance with fine clothes, and he's a bit crazy so give his tacky appearance some slack!)

-Other Information: He is very quiet, and his personality usually hinders relationships. He dyed the suit to be "Moon-like" (which explains the odd colors). He mainly gets taken note of because he lurks on the roof-tops to get a better view of the moon (I guess he IS a bit of a "lune") Skin Link<- click

(WITH ALL DO RESPECT! IF THIS IS DENIED, I WANT A REASON [bECUASE THIS IS THE CHARACTER I SPECIFICALLY DESIGNED AND SKINNED FOR THIS SERVER])

Basically, if I'm denied, my revision WILL feature the same character and skin. Give specifics in your reasons, not just a copy-pasted list. I appreciate your input!

Thank you for your consideration (AGAIN)-

Tharor

[TeaLulu 1783]

Denied; Your character seems mentally unstable/psychotic. If you wish to play a psychotic character you will need an approved "Special" Villain application.

The fact that you admit you would kill someone for disagreeing with your beliefs leads me to believe that your character will need an approved "Special Character" application for you to play as you wish to.

For more information on "Villains" see here:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/2692-villain-application-thugs-tyrants-and-monsters/

I also cannot see your skin. Please upload it to a website such as imgur.com.