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[pheonix 6]

-Minecraft Account Name: that would be ---> pheonix_292

-How old are you?: 14 years of age!

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Canada/ -5 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I speak and write english very well. But every now and then i do miss a thing or two!

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i am 14 years of age and i enjoy sports,video games,hunting and fishing. I have a familly of 5 biological familly members 2 sisters and 1 mother also 1 father which live in different cities due to their seperation which i will not explain for my and their protection!

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: anywhere from 12-20 hours a week!

-How long have you played minecraft?: i have been playing for around 1 year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: i know that it stands for rolelpaying and that you play the game trough the eyes of the character you have chosen to play as such if you had picked a dwarf you would have been minign ALOT and driking ALOT of ale to!

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A very rich and fun experience!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: have not played in any other servers other than a one with far to many griefers in it whoch is why i had quit!

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore? : yes i have read the rules and the lore wich seem to me to be very just to me!

-Name the 4 races on this server: there are humans,dwarfs,elfs,orcs!

-How did you hear about us?: I learnt about you guys of through candle340's channel on youtube!

-Did you vote? of course i voted (even though i had no idea whoch one is whoch)!

-What was your favourite Law? my favorite law was no griefing due to the fact that i enjoy knowing that my construction or stuff will be safe at all times!

-What was your least favourite Law?: i do not not enjoy of them! :)

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? my account would be ---> pheonix292

In-Character: claudius because i enjoy versions of and or italien names!

-Character Name: pheonix_292

-What is your Race?: this would be human!

[bLordofthecraft.net/forumaccount: And this would be ---> pheonix292

-Biography: 20 year old human that enjoys getting in to combat with monsters and evil entities and beings alike that left his home at the young age of 15 with his father to engage in combat against the enemy of oren once the enemy crushed his father dies of his wounds. vowing revenge he sets out to be a military leader to help the kingdom of oren become the kingdom of glory and power!

-Character Age: 20 years of age.

-Character Appearance: young,strong,healthy looking human with a lovely full head of hair and beard and is musculer too!

-Character Personality: stubborn-humoristic-funny-witty-healthy young human that enjoys adventuring and combat and the adrenaline!

-Your ambitions: to become a renownd military leader!

-Can your character read or write? of course i can!

-Can your character mine? yes with no problem!

-Are you a capable builder: not bad at it i would not do it all the time but i still enjoy it!

-Can you wield a sword? of course i can have not read my biography!

-Enjoy Farming?: no way i do not enjoy it at all it the waiting and all the hassle with the soil thats puts me off!

-Does your character have any special skills? amazing tactican and swordsman skills due to my experience in battle!

-A screenshot of your Skin: view below ! ;D

http://minecraftskin...views&link=6997

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