Bornsteller 0 Share Posted September 23, 2011 welcome to the Eternal The Lore The Eternal was a legend made long ago in the beginings of Aegis,Four Immortal Humans(races) where born to proctect the people of Aegis and defeat The Evil that lurks in the shadows. The Eternal where defeated against a powerful foe who rose up and attack them burned down their homes and took the lives of many. The Eternal are scattered around the world of Aegis and now have become simply a Myth. Mothers and Fathers tell there children how they came to be, But they arent a Myth they are still out there proctecting the lives of many from the undead and other followers of the Evil power. Bornsteller, the leader of Eternal decided to Make the Myth come alive again and make the people of Aegis fell proctected against the undead. The Eternal have a long and dangerous journey ahead of them, But they must recruit the people of Aegis to become powerful again, Enough power to defeat the undeadm and its followers that lurks in the North capturing each base as it goes, Awaiting for its next attack on Al'Khazar, The remnants of the Eternal are soo little only 4 remain, but they will be watching certain people around Aegis to be worthy of the responsibility it takes to be a Eternal, Your journey begins here you take it or you leave it your choice..... Leader IGN: xxXXF4LLENXXxx BornSteller Ranks Warriors: Warrior-servants: ================= Master-builder: Builders: ================= Proctectors: Loyalists: ================= First-Borns: ================ Application IGN: RP Name: RP-Age: Race: Whats RP? Requested Rank (only for the first 4 people): How did you become a Eternal?: Are you willingly?: ================================ RULES! Don't reveal location of base Respect the leader and co-leader Proctect the people Don't kill unprovoked if hit 2nd time you may attack and if its a *person in the shadows then attack on sight!* We are sworn to proctect The People of Aegis. earn the vip's and Gm's respect! (there is benefits) ============================================ ======================================== There is no skin restrictions. (ooc) p.s we have not found a suitable place to build so that gives you a chance to choose (far away) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynden 16 Share Posted September 24, 2011 I dont meen to be mean but I beleive your lore could ise a little work as it is quite short and at times hard to understand. Just a suggestion :grin: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bornsteller 0 Author Share Posted September 24, 2011 I dont meen to be mean but I beleive your lore could ise a little work as it is quite short and at times hard to understand. Just a suggestion :grin: sure thing :D So what suggestion should you make on how the lore goes? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynden 16 Share Posted September 24, 2011 sure thing :D So what suggestion should you make on how the lore goes? actually since you edited it it seems quite well done. However I dont think you should focus entirly on the undead as they are being removed most likly within the next few mounths Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bornsteller 0 Author Share Posted September 24, 2011 actually since you edited it it seems quite well done. However I dont think you should focus entirly on the undead as they are being removed most likly within the next few mounths sure thing but whenever i do space it deletes the letter in front of it making it harder to edit and one thing that confuses me like i post this no one looks at it or replys and the next one above it has alot more views and replys :/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lym 849 Share Posted April 13, 2012 This current Guild has been deemed inactive and has hereby been moved. If you wish to appeal this decision you must present evidence to myself proving the guild is still active. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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