[Denied]Kinotch's Application

[Kinotch 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:

Kinotch

How old are you?:

14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Australia +10 GMT

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes. Although when i type a typo i would just leave it as it is because you would know what it meant anyway.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Funny guy, from australia. I love playing on RP servers and once i become attached to one server i become dedicated to it. I love playing other games too though.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Weekly? Approximately about 3-5 hours

How long have you played minecraft?:

Since the nether update

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

Roleplaying is basically where you take control of a character you either create yourself or use as a template. Usually RP's are associated in games i love like the legend of zelda and such. Basically it is acting. I have never actually been on a hardcore RP server like this one but i have played lots of RPG's and also might have roleplayed a little over mic. They are usually set in a medieval/fantasy realm with fighting and stuff.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

Well i expect it to be a completely new experience to how i have always usually played minecraft. I'm more used to rank based servers but i think this kind of server would be awesome too.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on Ragebarrel and =Redlight=. i havent really left redlight yet but i got bored of ragebarrel.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

Yes of course otherwise i would not have bothered to type up this application. The lore is quite gripping and is what drew me to the server.

Name the 4 races on this server.

Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves

How did you hear about us?:

The minecraft forum.

Did you vote?:

Yes

What was your favourite Law?:

Theft is a punishable offence. I absolutley HATE griefers or thieves

What was your least favourite Law?:

None. I find them all to be very fair

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

Kinotch

In-Character:

Character Name:

Lars

What is your Race?:

Elf

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

Kinotch

Biography:

He comes from the elven city of Sarrelend. A large city populated completely by elves.His mother died when he was at the age of 12. His father left him before he was born. He is not poor nor wealthy. He likes to run around and go hunting. Specialises with a bow and arrow but can weild a sword too. He wants to become like his father. His mother would tell him stories of his father and about the adventures the two of them would go on. He loves to help people in need and hates all evil. His a fast runner and very active. He is in desperate need of money as he is living off debts and unpaid bills. He is quite smart. Once worked up, nothing can stop him from achieving what his needs. He had an older sister who cared for him until he turned 16, who wished him to complete his ambitions and travel to the far lands of Aegis, where the lands are said to be poplulated by other races, such as orcs, humans. His mother died while he was hunting one day. He was on high alert as he had heard there were orcs in the area. His mother was looking for him and startled him, triggering a shot that hit her square in the chest. Grief and suicidal thoughts were all he could think nof for the months to come until his older sister became fed up with his moping.

"You cant just sit around here moping all day and night. I'm fed up! You have to live your life to the fullest. Its what mum would have wanted. You wanted to be an explorer? Well your definitely not exploring anything while you are sitting around in here."

Inspiring him to pick up his bow and arrow once again, he trained everyday for 4 years. On that one faithful night, he returned after his "special training" and after being gone for 3 weeks he returned to a burning forest. His entire city had been raided by greedy orcs who only wanted slaughter. The large familiar oak trees holding up the houses and bridges had fallen and blocks pathways. He saw familiar dead bodies and desperately searched for his home, hoping his sister was alright and found nothing. His things were gone and his sister with them. Maybe she had escaped with their things or maybe the orcs had simply killed her and taken everything. He would never know. After 2 years, living undercover in a night elf pub, a group of rowdy orcs entered. They talked of their plans to travel to Aegis and reminisced of when they so happily destroyed the elf town of Sarreland. After hearing mention of Sarreland, Lars began to eavesdrop more thoroughly. They were the same orc tribe that attacked his town. That day he swore to annhilate that one tribe of orcs.

Character Age:

18

Character Appearance:

brown messy hair .Black eyes and light skin. Usually wears his purple hood. Quite thin but very masculine.

Character Personality:

Very Proud and arrogant archer although is usually nice to others.

Your ambitions:

He seeks a powerful party to go with him on a grand adventure. Wants to become like his parents and explore the world to gather and learn of the other cultures but mostly, to find the orcs that killed his home town.

Can your character read or write?:

Yes

Can your character mine?:

No

Are you a capable builder?

Yes. Especially with the power of electricity (redstone)

Can you wield a sword?

Yes

Enjoy Farming?:

No

Does your character have any special skills?:

Stealthy and acts like an assassin. May act hostile but is far from it.

A screenshot of your skin:

Hood on: http://i.imgur.com/ahh77.png

Hood off: http://i.imgur.com/wF58j.png

Other Information:

I hope to be accepted and to make lots of friends.

[Kinotch 0]

bump

[TeaLulu 1783]

Do not bump your applications, EVER.

Denied.

Please expand and improve your biography. Talk about your character's past and probable future in more detail.

You may check our Tutorial & Guides Forum for assistance in writing a good bio, there are many good Guides posted there.

Please provide a better/more detailed answer for the following questions:

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind? What exactly is roleplaying, in your own words?

What are your ambitions?

[Kinotch 0]

re-edited and sorry for bumping too

[TeaLulu 1783]

Re-post a new app in 2 days.

This application would still be denied so I suggest you work on it more. Improve your grammar, sentence structure, and coherency.