Damorzalizer's application

[Damoralizer 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Damoralizer

-How old are you?: 17

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +2 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, my home language is English.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I live in South Africa. I am a male. I recently bought Minecraft. During the day I am at school. When I get home I do some homework, when I am done I play a bit of Minecraft or other games before bed time which is at like 10.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Possibly 5-10 hours weekly.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for about 1 to 2 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I understand that it is taking on another persona, mostly in a computer game but sometimes in a board game, like DnD. I love the RPG experience, especially the Minecraft one because of the possibilities attached to it.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: An awesome RPG experience, one that I have probably never experienced before. When I saw this server I jumped at the opportunity to try and join.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I tired to play on Minecraft.dk, but it didn’t work.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, completely.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, and Dwarves

-How did you hear about us?: On the minecraftforum.net, I stumbled upon you.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Damoralizer

In-Character:

-Character Name: Damoralizer

-What is your Race?: High Elf

-Biography: Ragnorfde (formally known) is an only child. After his father left his mother and him alone in the city of Aegis, Ragnorfde always got into trouble. He was always at the wrong place at the wrong time and no one could ever understand why. Ragnorfde is very cleaver but also quite an arrogant elf. If he didn’t like something he would try to correct it. People slowly started calling him Damoralizer (Da (the) moralizer. A pun upon the word demoralizer) because he would always grief their works but give 'useful' criticism. He was so attach to greifing and 'fixing' that one day he got locked up and sent to a swamp to live there for ever. Alone there he pondered upon his actions until one day, many years later, he said to himself, "I WILL NEVRE, NEVER GRIEF EVER AGAIN!!!" An old wise witch heard this and so she cast a spell on Damoralizer, that prevented him from greifing, she also teleported him back to Aegis. That is where Damoralizer finds himself now, back home, ready to start over and start crafting. (I made this all up. I have never actually griefed work before, nor do I intend to)

-Character Age: 76, still young.

-Character Appearance: Dark ranger clothes, because of where he was (the swamp).

-Character Personality: Outspoken and confident, has leadership abilities.

-Your ambitions: To mine, farm, fight and eventually start a beautiful city, with excellent commerce, and high intellectual standards.

-Can your character read or write?: Both, very well.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, he is a strong elf.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes, he is a creative elf.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, he is a brave elf.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes, he is a prospering elf.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, having the ability to make people understand his intentions and to lead them well.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: I have never seen such an innovative, excellent looking and functioning server.

[TeaLulu 1783]

Denied.

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[Damoralizer 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Damoralizer

-How old are you?: 17

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +2 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, my home language is English.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I live in South Africa. I am a male. I recently bought Minecraft. During the day I am at school. When I get home I do some homework, when I am done I play a bit of Minecraft or other games before bed time which is at like 10.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Possibly 5-10 hours weekly.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for about 1 to 2 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I understand that it is taking on another persona, mostly in a computer game but sometimes in a board game, like DnD. I love the RPG experience, especially the Minecraft one because of the possibilities attached to it.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: An awesome RPG experience, one that I have probably never experienced before. When I saw this server I jumped at the opportunity to try and join.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I tried to play on Minecraft.dk, but it didn’t work.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, completely.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, and Dwarves

-How did you hear about us?: On the minecraftforum.net, I stumbled upon you.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Damoralizer

In-Character:

-Character Name: Damoralizer

-What is your Race?: High Elf

-Biography: Ragnorfde (formally known) is an only child. After his father left his mother and him alone in the city of Aegis, Ragnorfde always got into trouble. He was always at the wrong place at the wrong time and no one could ever understand why. Ragnorfde is very cleaver but also quite an arrogant elf. If he didn’t like something he would try to correct it. People slowly started calling him Damoralizer (Da (the) moralizer. A pun upon the word demoralizer) because he would always grief their works but give 'useful' criticism. He was so attach to greifing and 'fixing' that one day he got locked up and sentenced to the swamp to live there forever. Alone there he pondered upon his actions until one day, many years later, he said to himself, "I WILL NEVRE, NEVER GRIEF EVER AGAIN!!!" An old wise witch heard this and so she cast a spell on Damoralizer, that prevented him from greifing, she also teleported him back to Aegis. His near future intentions are to either start working as a merchant or to become a miner. His later future intentions become someone of importance in Aegis. (I made this all up. I have never actually griefed work before, nor do I intend to)

-Character Age: 76, still young.

-Character Appearance: Dark ranger clothes, because of where he was (the swamp).

-Character Personality: Outspoken and confident, has leadership abilities.

-Your ambitions: To become a person of importance in Aegis. Trading and prospering, seeking fame and fortune, on the way there.

-Can your character read or write?: Both, very well.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, he is a strong elf.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes, he is a creative elf.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, he is a brave elf.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes, he is a prospering elf.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, having the ability to make people understand his intentions and to lead them well.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: I have never seen such an innovative, excellent looking and functioning server.

[Ivrae 30]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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