making my aplication

[sargentgrif 1]

ut-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:sargentgriff

-How old are you?:11

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:pacific

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i wake up every morning do my school get my home work done then i like to play a little minecraft then i eat dinner then i go to bed.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:every day i wake up eat breakfast do my school play some minecraft then go out side hang out with my friends then watch some tv then go to bed

-How long have you played minecraft?:about a half a year

-What do you know about roleplaying?: i under stand that role play is taking on the challenge of seeing through a characters eyes and hear through the character and taking on the life of him and making the choice of being good or bad

-What do you expect this server will be like?: a good environment and a good challenge and a some good fights

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: a server called petri raids a RPING server and my server and some building server

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes i have read and agree with the rules

-Name the 4 races on this server: there are elves orcs humans dwarves this does not include the undead

-How did you hear about us?: from a guy on YouTube called petri raids

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: sargentgrif

In-Character:

-Character Name: griffin

-What is your Race?: orcs

-Biography: when i was born my mom new i would be very strong and smart and when i got to about 11. i loved to hang out with my dad and waiting for him to come back after undead fights and all wase wonted to be like him when i grew up. 15 years later now i am big and strong and wont to kick some undead but before the last time my dad went out to fight the undead i ask my dad if i could come with him i wonted to fight and told him we would be a good team and said no and i said ok a minute later i picked up are mining pickaxe and set off to follow my dad i was following them when they got ambushed and my dad got ganged up by 4 undead and he die i watched him die i cryed a little and got up like a man and droped the pickaxe and picked up my dads axe and like a man kicked some undead but went back home told my mom and left and swore to my self i would kill every undead in aegis.

-Character Age:15

-Character Appearance: a big orc read to fight for his race and for his dads honor

-Character Personality: a smart big orc thats good at being a leader and wonts to kill all the undead in his dads honor

-Your ambitions: to be a very good RPING person and to kill all the undead in my dads honor

-Can your character read or write?: yes i can read and write

-Can your character mine?: yes my character can mine

-Are you a capable builder?: yes being strong and big i can pick up big blocks and make big houses

-Can you wield a sword?: yes i am very good with a sword and with a axe

-Enjoy Farming?: yes i do i could farm for a while

-Does your character have any special skills?: i am good at fighting

-A screenshot of your skin http://www.minecraftskins.com/ copy and paste this and put in it an orc aaaaaaa

-Other Information: regardless if i am accepted i just wanna say you guys are doing a good job keep up the good work (:

[TeaLulu 1783]

Denied.

For any of the following issues:

1) Your biography is: incoherent, not formatted properly, not long enough, not detailed, only focuses on 1 event rather than your life as a whole, exhibits

qualities of powergaming, needs to talk about your past and probable future, or needs to be expanded, or did not fit lore.

2) You did not answer the "What do you know about roleplaying?" question in a satisfactory manner. (Hint: Tell us WHAT roleplaying is, in your own words.)

3) Your skin picture is not a screenshot of your skin in use, not provided, the link is broken, or not appropriate for this server.

4) You failed to fill out the application in it's entirety.

5) You did not use the proper application format.

6) You posted more than 1 application in a 3 day period of time.

7) You bumped your post.

8) Your application is plagiarized or too similar to another application I have seen.

Please keep in mind the following:

1) This server is a ROLEPLAY server, we expect any applicants to know WHAT exactly that means and any relevant terms.

2) This server is NOT for everyone. We can afford to be choosey with who we allow to play on it. It is NOT our obligation to accept you; Rather, it is our obligation to maintain a fun and safe environment for all of our current users and any future users.

3) Our server, our rules. If we say you need a Villain Application to play your character, then you NEED a Villain Application.

4) Re-posting your application within 3 days is grounds for it to be denied.

5) You MUST adhere to the Lore; You can and SHOULD read your race's relevant Roleplay forum to get a better idea of what it is like to roleplay that race.

6) You can and SHOULD read the Tutorials and Guides forum.