My 3rd App

[ChipsDean 0]

Application

-Minecraft Account Name: ChipsDean

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT +10 Australia

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I do but Sometimes I make mistakes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I love playing Games like Minecraft and Also love Role Playing.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Usually up to 6 Hours a day.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Played it for 9 months but I have played Multiplayer for about 2 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: This is my first time roleplaying and I hope it I will learn lots .

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Great, Fun, Friendly.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: None.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes and Yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Humans, Dwarves, Orcs and Elves.

-How did you hear about us?: Official Minecraft forum.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? ChipsDean

In-Character:

-Character Name: Ender.

-What is your Race?: Human.

-Biography: Ender was Named after his Brother who died 5 years before Ender was born. Ender's Father was a Northerner and was a merchant who often traded with Elves. Ender's Father Died when he went into the Orc War Nation of Kragrum. He never came back. Ender's Mother was also a Northerner and she worked as a farmer. She taught Ender How to Read and write. Ender's Mother Died of unknown causes. Ender didn't know what he wanted to do for a living until he was offered a job at an Inn. Dean finally left his job to find another Inn to work at but still has not found one.

-Character Age: 25.

-Character Appearance: Brown hair, beard, side burns and Blue eyes.

-Character Personality: He is quite a friendly person and is hard working.

-Your ambitions: To get a job and a small house.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes.

-Can your character mine?: Yes.

-Are you a capable builder? Yes.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, but he will only fight if he has to.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is a great builder and hopes to become a builder or an Inn Keeper.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: I hope I have a great time on this server.

[TeaLulu 1783]

Denied.

For any of the following issues:

1) Your biography is: incoherent, not formatted properly, not long enough, not detailed, only focuses on 1 event rather than your life as a whole, exhibits qualities of powergaming, needs to talk about your past and probable future, or needs to be expanded, or did not fit lore.

2) You did not answer the "What do you know about roleplaying?" question in a satisfactory manner. (Hint: Tell us WHAT roleplaying is, in your own words.)

3) Your skin picture is not a screenshot of your skin in use, not provided, the link is broken, or not appropriate for this server.

4) You failed to fill out the application in it's entirety.

5) You did not use the proper application format.

6) You posted more than 1 application in a 3 day period of time.

7) You bumped your post.

8) Your application is plagiarized or too similar to another application I have seen.

Please keep in mind the following:

1) This server is a ROLEPLAY server, we expect any applicants to know WHAT exactly that means and any relevant terms.

2) This server is NOT for everyone. We can afford to be choosey with who we allow to play on it. It is NOT our obligation to accept you; Rather, it is our obligation to maintain a fun and safe environment for all of our current users and any future users.

3) Our server, our rules. If we say you need a Villain Application to play your character, then you NEED a Villain Application.

4) Re-posting your application within 3 days is grounds for it to be denied.

5) You MUST adhere to the Lore; You can and SHOULD read your race's relevant Roleplay forum to get a better idea of what it is like to roleplay that race.

6) You can and SHOULD read the Tutorials and Guides forum.

[StatutoryGrape 0]

It's denied because it's a net of your skin, not a screenshot.

[ChipsDean 0]

I fixed that in my 4th Application.