My application

[EricderRote 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: EricderRote

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Deutschland, Berlin

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I would think so but everyone makes mistakes now and then.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I´m playing with friends minecraft Rps. I love RP.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: probably about 1-2 hours a day

-How long have you played minecraft?: I've played for 1 years.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: This is when you take role of a character in a game. In this instance it is a minecraft person and the knowledge and skill this person has in this game is found out by what he experiences. You will come from town to town with friends and you will fight versus enemys.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I think this server will be an amazing server with a great social community.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i´ve played at alot of RPs server but these server is the best.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, i have. i full understand what the rules and fully agree to them.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves. This is not including the subraces and Undead and Ascended.

-How did you hear about us?: My friend said you had one of the best servers in minecraft.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: EricderRote

In-Character:

-Character Name: Aahz

-What is your Race?: Orc

-Biography: -Biography: Aahz was borned in a terrible desert. Sandworms killed his mother but he survied by armadillos. When he lived their for many years the Rex of another clan of orks saw him and the armadillos and killed the beasts. He took the boy and taught him to read and write. Aahz was very intellegent for an orc and so he became and shaman of the orc clan.

After some years the Undead came to his clan and killed all of the orcs but not him. The Undead saw that he has Power in his mind and get strong. They said to him:,,If you are ready i some years, we will come and the fight of your revenge will begin." After this words the Undead went back to the Nether ,where they came from

Aahz started walking through the desert, but he felt tired. Then he expected that the Undead took his magic power. His only weapon was only his mind, intelligence and his sword...

Then he arrived Aegis and he knew that his adventure will be start here...

-Character Age: 65

-Character Appearance: He wears the skin of a wolf on his head. He also wears a lioncloth.

http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/orcish-shaman/

-Character Personality: He is old but intellegent. He knows how to talk to other races and orcs. He can talk wise and stupid for orcs. If he gets into trouble he can protect himself with words and with a weapon. He is´nt the best fighter but he will learn some magic tricks.

He knows how to control people. He hates the Undead and the dwarvs.

-Your ambitions: He wants to become the best shaman and win over the Undead

-Can your character read or write?: Yes. He can read and write very well

-Can your character mine?: No, he must get help from other orcs. He can only cutdown trees.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes, he can build ordinary house but not fancy castles.

-Can you wield a sword?: Aazh can wield a sword.

-Enjoy Farming?: Aazh must farm for his medicine.

-Does your character have any special skills?: he is an amateur wizzard and he has got an unnusual talent for reading and writing

[Alana (Previously Latsi) 136]

Denied, please fix the following:

1) Grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

2) Incomplete application, there was no link to a skin.

3) Having a drug addiction is a villainous action, you need a lesser evil villain application for it.

4) The biography involved undead flying, which would be against server rules, and against lore.