making my application

[sargentgrif 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: SargentGriff

-How old are you?: 11

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: pacific

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: my favorite game is minecraft. my favorite thing to do is hang out with my friends and have fun. my favorite subject to do in school is science.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: five hours a day

-How long have you played minecraft?: about a half a year

-What do you know about roleplaying?: that is like your a person and you have to be this person and look threw her or his eyes and you have to live there life. sorry if i made this two short i didn't no how long you wonted it so i just made it good but quick so you can read it fast

-What do you expect this server will be like?: a good RPing server that is going to be fun

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i played on rp-mine.net the reason i quite playing the server is because it wasn't very fun so i stopped playing on it

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes

-Name the 4 races on this server: elves orcs dwarves. not including the undead

-How did you hear about us?: a guy on youtube called petri raids

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: sargentgrif

In-Character:

-Character Name: griffin

-What is your Race?: orc

-Biography: im a strong orc that is ready to give his life for the people of aegis. and is a very friendly person that is good at making friends with all the races. and is pretty smart at being a good leader. and had a good child hood but when grew up had his dad die and swore to his self he would fight for aegis at all costs. and is a very able orc he could make a army very easily. he likes to build lots of cool stuff like nice homes. and likes to help out his friends with any thing he can help with. he likes to raid the undead. and just have fun in the world of aegis.

-Character Age: 15

-Character Appearance: friendly to all races but likes to kick undead but

-Character Personality: hipper happy exited. and all ways willing to help

-Your ambitions: to make a giant army and defeat the undead and get lots o minas and just have fun

-Can your character read or write?: yes

-Can your character mine?: yes

-Are you a capable builder?: yes

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: yes

-Does your character have any special skills?: im pretty good at fighting

-A screenshot of your skin: file:///C:/Users/Ashton/AppData/Roaming/.minecraft/screenshots/2011-09-27_21.51.49.png sorry if this doesn't work if it doesn't just copy and paste it and look it up on the web and you will fined it

-Other Information:

[Alana (Previously Latsi) 136]

Denied, please fix the following:

1) Skin link doesn't work.

2) Elaborate on your answers; Complete sentences help.

3) Fix grammar, punctuation, and spelling.

4) Expand on your biography, give it a past and a future.

5) Define what Role-Playing is, you must know what it is as that is what this server is about.