TsTempaaah's new and improved application

[TsTempaaah 0]

out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: TsTempaaah

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: united kingdom

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a hardcore gamer, I love playing minecraft whenever I can. i love helping people with their problems on servers and I am very friendly and fun to play with. I am currently at high school doing my GSCE soon in a couple of years. I really enjoy minecraft servers because you can connect with your friends and also make new friends within the server. I love computer games and Xbox’s also I love playing out on my bike with my friends and having some fun

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 24-58 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?: 2 years

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I have a good experience in roleplaying and I have been doing it for 2 and a half years.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: a but kicking, interactive, friendly community online server where anybody will help you out with your problems.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: city craft and I left it because I wanted to experience something new.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, orcs, elf’s, and dwarfs

-How did you hear about us?: from a friend

-Did you vote?: yes

-What was your favourite Law?: no spamming

-What was your least favourite Law?: don’t have a least favorite

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? TsTempaaah

In-Character:

-Character Name: yelkdefore

-What is your Race?: dwarf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: TsTempaaah

-Biography: yelkdefore was questing over a mountain one day when an angel came down and blessed him with the name he now carries, the angel told him that for him to ascend he must smite all evil and rid the land of the undead, from that day forth he has strove to do so, now yelkdefore has done what he promised and will now save the world and get rid of the nastiness within.

-Character Age: 476

-Character Appearance: small with dark brown hair he has a small ring on that dedicates his loyalty to the people, a brown ripped t-shirt where he has been in loads of battles and dark green eyes, he has a long thick scar on the right hand side of his cheek where he was hit by his father when he was young and finally he had a half burnt hand which is his left where when he was younger his house caught fire and he was stuck in it luckily his dad rescued him just in time befor the roof collapsed also he has ripped and baggy geans that he has had scince he was little.

-Character Personality: honourable, determined, noble, joyful and willing to help others in there time of need. He is not shy and not afraid to ask questions to anyone, he does not argue, always helps people with their problems and will do anything he can to help anybody. He is loyal to the admin and will fight and serve to protect his city also yelkdefore is very good at spying and he will one day become a good assassin to serve and protect.

-Your ambitions: to help others, and to be lyoal to the server and to the admin and the city.

-Can your character read or write?: yes

-Can your character mine?: yes

-Are you a capable builder? yes

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: yes

-Does your character have any special skills? Yes he has the ability to sneak around unseen and would make a good assassin to hire for an elite mission in the art of stealth.

-A screenshot of your skin: don’t know how to do that sorry about that, admins

-Other Information: I like pie also i love this server my friend is on it after being denied 3 times and he says it was awesome. i love what you are doing with the server keep it up and i hope in the future this server will be really successful. thank you for taking the time to read my application and i hope it gets granted by the admin's someday and if i get denied please could i have some info on what i did wrong so i can build on that and learn from my mistakes. thank you for reading and i hope you enjoy it.

[TsTempaaah 0]

please somebody answer

[NairOG 1]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/7515-example-application-bubbli/

Also, do NOT contact me in order to view your new application.