Corinog Thunderbeard's application

[someguy45187 29]

Minecraft Account Name:Dwarfguy45187

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes but I often make mistakes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Im 14 like to play Minecraft And play many other games. I go to school most of the day but i get good grades.I don't play any sports but I do martial arts.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:15-25 hours

How long have you played minecraft?:4 or 5 months

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: It's the act of playing as another person, I've done strict roleplay.

What do you expect this server will be like?:A great fun server with lots of rp and pvp

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I left My other servers because they weren't professional.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes I have read the lore and agreed to everything

Name the 4 races on this server:Human,Dwarf,Elf,Orc,

How did you hear about us?:Youtube.

Did you vote?:Yes i did vote.

What was your favourite Law?:No Destroying The landscape.

What was your least favourite Law?:None of them I completely agree with all of them

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Dwarfguy

In-Character:

Character Name:Corinog Thunderbeard

What is your Race?:Dwarf

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:Dwarfguy

Biography:On Corinogs 7th Birthday his present was a wooden pick that is when his career began at that point on he wanted to be the best miner in all of Kal'Urgan. When he was 13 his father brought him to mine with him he found 5 iron; good for a kid he was very talented. When he turned 17 his mother was very ill he had to help her alot and didn't get to mine with his father often. After a year his mother died it was just him and his father. So one day when Corinog woke up he decided that he needed to learn how to use a sword so he apprenticed under a swordsman. It was very hard for him he had never wielded a sword. Corinog eventually succeeded in learning how to wield a sword. When Corinog turned 23 he decided he needed to get a house of his own. So Corinog eventually gathered enough money to buy a house but not a very good one. Corinog wasn't very happy with his house but thought that it would have to do for now.

So he had to mine very hard to gain enough money as it was now his job to mine. Corinog did not really need to be in a hurry so in no time he had a pretty good house he lived in peace until one day he thought he needed to make a difference and become a hero. So his sword skills payed off because he joined the dwarven army. It turned out he didn't even use his sword, with his mining skills he supplied the army with minerals. So he after a year of supplying the army with minerals he wanted to fight and protect the dwarven nation. He was accepted he had joined the army and wanted to help in a battle. Corinogs first battle was against the undead he had never fought a living thing before or should i say undead? So he barely made it out alive he was only saved by another dwarf. He vowed to help that dwarf in any way he could such as saving his life. After many battles he was able to survive anything that hit him by that time he was 34 years old. He was also promoted for saving many dwarves about to die.On his next battle the dwarf that had saved him on his first battle died but he managed to avenge him. He was sad that he had failed in what he said he would do. He didn't fight for a year because of shame but he decided to man up and fight. For he is a patriot so he will defend the dwarves. On his next fight he had a minor wound that left him out of his next battle the thing that made him sad was that it was a very important battle between the dwarves and orcs.Unfortunately the dwarves were massacared in the fight! He was slightly glad that he wasn't in it because he probably would have died but most of all they lost so he was more unhappy.

That made him mad so on his next battle he went berserk, he slaughtered many orcs out of hate. His old swordsman that was his master died when he was doing important buisness because of a group of orcs. That made him have more hatred toward orcs he hoped to one day avenge his master and he must he will! Eliminate many orcs from the face of aegis!

Character Age:34

Character Appearance:A dwarf with brown hair and a beard also blue eyes

Character Personality:Kind and trustworthy a really nice guy indeed.

Your ambitions:To become a great swordsman. Also to kill many orcs from the face of aegis.

Can your character read or write?:Yes knows both he was born kind of smart so his father taught him when he was 5

Can your character mine?:Yes but hasn't done so in many years

Are you a capable builder?:No he has never been a great builder.

Can you wield a sword?:Yes he was taught by a swordsman and has fought many battles in the dwarven army.

Enjoy Farming?:No he only likes mining as a hobby.

Does your character have any special skills?:Yes he is a very good fighter in the dwarven army and is very lucky in mining.

A screenshot of your skin:My Skin Link

Other Information:I really like this server and if im not accepted I will not give up trying to join.Im also very sorry for any grammar mistakes or anything like that.

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography (yours is not bad) and also indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detain into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore.