Altoninjas 6th Application

[altoninja 6]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Altoninja

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA central

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am 14 years old. I am in the 8th grade. I enjoy designing and building things on and off the computer. I make prity good graids in all my classes( which are all adv.)

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 5/12 hours a week at min.

-How long have you played minecraft?: about 4 months. I got it when I got a laptop because my desk top is really crapy, old and slow.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: yes I play lots of world of war craft and when I was younger I would play aq worlds and rune scape alllllll the time.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be really fun because a friend plays it and it’s just like WoW and Minecraft combined.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have only been in my friends server but he shut it down because he didn’t like it and it was getting too big for his computer.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes (they seems vary reasonable)

-Name the 4 races on this server: Dwarves, Humans, Elves, and Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?: my fiend Ambros(sagwart)

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Altoninja

In-Character:

-Character Name: Bronze Beard

-What is your Race?: dwarf

-Biography: Bronze Beard grew up in a small house above his dads somewhat successful architect business. When he was young his father taught him how to build and design houses and traps and all sorts of stuff. Later on his father was kill by a creeper while he was working on his newest creation late at night. Later his mom was hospitalized with a severe case of depression. Bronze Beard took up a architectural apprenticeship in the dwrvern capital, Kal’Urguan. Now Bronze beard spends his free time killing creeper, drinking ail, and visiting his friends for a good adventure. Bronze beard took over his family business and has become quite successful.

-Character Age: 100 (a middle age dwarf in most perspective)

-Character Appearance: Bronze Beard is about 4 ft. and has a waste length bronze orange beard. He wears gold chain armor with diamond studs. And a red helm with a gold square with his family crest engraved in it.

-Character Personality: Bronze Beard loves his ail and a good advencher. He is always up for a battle. But his favorite thing to do is build extraordinary things.

-Your ambitions: Bronze Beard is more of a go with the flow person If you know what I mean. But if he had to choose something it would to become the Best architect in all of Kal’Urguan.

-Can your character read or write?: when he is not drunk on ail and life.

-Can your character mine?: of corse he can he is a F**king dwarf. It’s in his Blood ( literally, he had an accident when he was little but doesn’t like to talk about it)

-Are you a capable builder?: yes he is a fantastic builder.

-Can you wield a sword?: yes but prefers an axe or bow.

-Enjoy Farming?: No but dose like eating what was farmed

-Does your character have any special skills?:Building and mining.

-A screenshot of your skin:

me

[Alana (Previously Latsi) 136]

Denied, please fix the following:

1) Define what Role-Playing is, you must know what it is as that is what this server is about.

2) Expand on your biography, give it a past and a future.

3) Elaborate on your answers; Complete sentences help.

4) Fix grammar, punctuation, and spelling.