AusRGra's Application #3

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Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: AusRGra13

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: CST/United States of America

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, though I will commit a typo every once and a while.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a sophomore in high school and I love music, sports, and video games. I play the Piano, French Horn, Mellophone, I also sing as a tenor in choir. When I'm not in school or studying I entertain my two great loves Tennis and video games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I live at my dads house, which has no internet, on the weekdays. However when I go to my moms on the weekends I am able to spend about 20 hours playing Minecraft.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: I have played Minecraft for nearly 6 months.

-What do you know about role-playing?: Role-playing is all about having an imagination. You create a character and develop that character by adventuring and interacting with other character's. I also know not to use information that my character wouldn't know inside the game.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A great experience with other people who love role-playing and video games. I am also expecting beautiful cities with excellent architecture.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have not been with any other servers.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I understand the rules and I agree to them, for they are well structured and create a positive environment.

-Name the 4 races on this server: The main races on this server are the Elves, Humans, Orcs, and Dwarfs.

-How did you hear about us?: My good friend sprintindwarf told me about the server and I was immediately intrigued.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: AusRGra

In-Character:

-Character Name: Gabriel Arcturus

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Biography: Wanting to leave his boring farm life on the out-skirts of town Gabriel ran from home at age 16. He set out to meet new people and to explore the world of Aegis. In Laurelin he met a man named Olar. Olar was a very wise, old man, and he saw Gabriel's potential, so he taught Gabriel to read and write. Gabriel was very thankful of Olar and offered to work for him to repay him. Olar refused and told Gabriel to leave and continue his journey. Gabriel listened to Olar and left Laurelin. While traveling Gabriel met a woman named Evalon. Evalon was a very shy and quit Elf, and she was also very beautiful. The two fell in love with each other, and decided they wanted to get married. Sadly, before they got married Evalon was taken by a band of thugs. Gabriel was held back forced to listen to the sound of her shrieks as she was brutally beaten. The thugs released Gabriel, leaving him mentally broken down from the traumatic experience. Not knowing if Evalon survived he spent months looking for her, for he had sworn he would find her and unleash his wrath on the thugs that separated them. Gabriel still searches for Evalon while traveling the world. He has hope that one day they will

be reunited and that they will marry.

-Character Age: 20 years of age.

-Character Appearance: Gabriel is an elf with blue eyes and blond hair. Gabriel prefers to dress light weight, and has no need for fancy clothes and jewelry. He towers over his enemies at 6 foot 11 and 241 lbs.

-Character Personality: Confidence, determination, and the willingness to put his life for the safety of others is what makes Gabriel a natural born leader. Gabriel is also a very compassionate person, helping the poor and defending those in danger.

-Your ambitions: Gabriel aspires to become a military leader to defend his people and rid Aegis of the undead. But, his greatest goal is to find Evalon and those that took her away from him.

-Can your character read or write?: Gabriel knows how to read and write well, and enjoys sitting down and reading every once and a while.

-Can your character mine?: Gabriel prefers not to mine because of his size being a nuisance in the underground, and he does not have much experience with a pick-axe.

-Are you a capable builder?: Gabriel is very interested in architecture and it is something he has considered for when he retires.

-Can you wield a sword?: Gabriel has spent many hours practicing, and becoming deadly with all arms including the sword.

-Enjoy Farming?: Gabriel spent his childhood on a farm. He absolutely despises it though, mostly because of his lack of patience. This being one of the many reason's he ran from home.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Gabriel's greatest skill is using his creativity and leadership to overcome obstacles.

-A screen shot of your skin: http://imageshack.us/content_round.php?page=done&l=img38/9488/20110925004542.png&via=mupload&newlp=1

[Agith 224]

Denied

This was a so close to being accepted too...However the statement "becoming deadly with all arms" dropped it. You're not a main protagonist, start off weak in some areas and build them. 16 is also too young for an elf... Elves are immortal, to be a 16 year old elf it basicly being a fetus if you compare it to a human.

I also failed to see many flaws with your character, he has no quirks or strange things that make him stand out as a unique character.