Dynasayus' 3rd app

[DylanL1209 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

Dynasayus

-How old are you?:

14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

GMT (UK)

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, but as I am still learning, I am bound to make some mistakes, as are we all.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I'm 14, still in school. I enjoy playing minecraft when I come home. I am intelligent and love RP and RPG games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

20- max 10-least

-How long have you played minecraft?:

Roughly 6 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying?:

You take on the role of another person. That person being your minecraft character. Anything you see or hear will be what he/she knows. You play as you were him/her, not as you were controlling them.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

EPIC. From what I've seen in trailers, it will be amazing..

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I played on The Kingdom Of Aeonis, and left because everything was hyped up on the forums, when I got into the actual server, I was greatly disappointed.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

Human, Elf Dwarf and Orc.

-How did you hear about us?:

Reckreations trailer on Youtube.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

DylanL1209.

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Dynasayus.

-What is your Race?:

Elf.

-Biography:

When he was 213 years old, Dyn's town of Hafan was attacked by the armies of an Orc warlord that was disgraced by his father. Dyn was allowed by his father to lead the counter-strike on the Orcs. Taking the best available men, Dyn took the men through an ancient passage that ran under the town walls. Using the battle at the south gate as a distraction, Dyn and his men bypassed the main battle and went straight for the warlords tent. With the element of surprise, Dyn and his men cut through all Orcs that stood in their way. Soon after the Orcs realized that their leader was dead the field commander ordered a retreat. Dyn saw no action after that.

Until the day his father turned 999, when another attack happened on the town. This time however, it wasn't the Orcs. It was a mysterious group of people in black robes, setting fire to the town! Dyn finally got back to the family estate to find it in ruins. Seeing nothing but his father's lucky green robe. As he donned the sacred robe, he noticed his uncle, lying on the floor grievously injured. In his last breaths, he told him of the secret chamber his father built 500 years ago outside the town. After his uncle had past, he went to the site of the chamber to see nothing but an old farm house. Going inside, he noticed an ancient stone door in the cellar. Going down the tunnel at the end, he came upon a massive chamber, bigger than the entire estate! In the center was an evil construct, with a glowing core and made up of the darkest rock ever found. There was a diamond pickaxe next to it. Running at it with the pickaxe, he destroyed the construct. As he was doing it, shadows formed around him and attacked! Feeling a rage, more intense than ever before, he succumbed to it. All around him was alight with a white flame, burning non-stop. As the chamber crumbled, a soft voice spoke out to him. Following the voice, he found himself in a strange place. Now he has no wealth, no family and no place to call home...

-Character Age:

300

-Character Appearance:

Tall, roughly 6ft1", blue eyes, always has his fathers lucky green robe on.

-Character Personality:

Good heart, but his personal feelings sometimes get in the way. He's loyal. Very loyal.

-Your ambitions:

Become a prince.

-Can your character read or write?:

Both, his parents taught him everything.

-Can your character mine?:

Yes, the local miners son was his best friend from childhood.

-Are you a capable builder?:

Depends on the build, I'm better at smaller builds.

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes, his personal trainer taught him.

-Enjoy Farming?:

Yes.

-Does your character have any special skills?:

Yes, the nightmares of the night of the attack have left him with a white hot rage, in which he can't control himself.

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4e7b81e27238d717869061289017217176617143

-Other Information:

[Ivrae 30]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/