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[qjacks 0]

-Minecraft Account Name Qjacks

-How old are you?: Im 15 Years Old

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:I live In Canada

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: im Good At Speaking English

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I Was Born In Korea But I Moved To Canada In 2006

So Im Good At English.I Luv Minecraft (i luv rp servers)

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I Play About 3-4 Hours A Day

-How long have you played minecraft?: Umm I Got It When It Was 1.2._01 Or somethin So Few Months Ago

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind? Yes I Know About Roleplaying, I Have Been Playing Alot Of Role Playing Game (E.G Oblivion,Fallout 3, Mount & Blade(idk if Thats roleplaying),etc) I Like Mideval Games. When I Play RP Games I Get In To The Chartacter And yea. I Didnt Really Do It On Minecraft But I Want To Try It.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Mideval Kinda Server, AND ALOT OF FUN

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I Play And BoB Server, Lpminecraft, Etc I Left a server because a admin was rlly bad and he demoted me

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? Yes I Hav Read, Understood, And Agreed to The Rules and I Have Read The Lore

-Name the 4 races on this server.Human, Elf, Orc and Dwarf.

-How did you hear about us?: I Found This Server In A Show In Youtube Called Fivething hosted By Shawnvmartin, Link:http://www.youtube.com/user/shawnvmartin#p/u/9/c3iQ3OWBaoU, 2:39

-Did you vote?:Yes I Have Voted

-What was your favourite Law?: My favourite Law Is -No racial disrimination or racist remarks, RP racism towards other in-game races is acceptable.

-What was your least favourite Law?: I Didnt Really Have Least Favourite Law

Qjacks I Think

-In-Character

-Character Name: Qjacks

-What is your Race?: Wood Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: qjacks

-Biography: I Was Born In The Cloud Temple Of Aegis, But While My Parents Were Moving To Other City, They Were Attacked By A Group Of Bandits. Bandits Didn't Kill Me, Instead They Took Me With Them For Some Reason So I Travelled To Alot Of Place With Them. While I Was Travelling I Wanted To Kill Them, But I Knew I Couldnt Because I Wasn't Strong Enough, I Didn't Have Any Weapons Or Armour. Few Years Of Travelling The Bandits Sold Me To Dwarves. Some Dwarves Were Friendly But Some Were Not. They Used Me As A Miner, Even Tho I Wasnt Good At It. Many Years Later, I Even Forgot I Was A Elf, I Thought I Was A Dwarf, I Spent Soo Much Time In This Place, Even The Dwarves Accepted Me As A Fellow Dwarf. Im The Best Miner In Town, One Day I Remembered, Im Not Suppose To Be Here, Im A Elf, I Have To Kill The Bandits That Killed My Parents. I Went To The Leader Of The Town, He Is My Friend, I Told Him I Have to Go, I Have To Find Them, This Is Not Where Im Suppose To Be, And He Told Me To Go, He Gave Me Weapon, Armour, Food, And The Map. I Thanked him, And Ran To The Cloud Temple Of Aegis, Where I Was Born. Days Passed, I Have Arrived, A Monk Said You Look Tired Young Elf, Rest... I Spent Days In The Cloud Temple, Im Ready, I Headed Out, And I Said GoodBye To The Monk, And My Journey Began...

-Character Age: 240

-Character Appearance: Woodland Elf

-Character Personality: Nice, Kind, But When Someone Makes Him Made, He is Scary

-Your ambitions: to become the Best Archer, And Kill The Undeads That Killed My Parents

-Can your character read or write?:yes, fluently

-Can your character mine?: He Can But Not Really good

-Are you a capable builder? Not Really

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: no

-Does your character have any special skills? He Is A Good Archer

-A screenshot of your skin:http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/wood-elf-452/

-Other Information: Im Banned For Playing With The Gate Switches In The Arena, Im Sorry for that and i hope i get unbanned and get accepted :) Here Is Link To My Ban Appeal:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/20742-ban-appeal/

[XDSub 1]

Before a reviewer gets to you I'll offer some advice :) Friendly Advice!

The mods are probably going to say that you need to explain WHAT role playing is.. (Wiki/Dictionary could help)

Also that your bio is cliche and or already used. Although you did a great job referencing the lore.

You might want to address your name also, on an RP server you want a name that suits your character, and while Qjack suits you as a person, I probably does not suit your elven character,

Also look up Elven aging, at 24 an Elf would still be a child. Pick any age from 80-600 and you should be ok :)

Knock out those few points and you should have a much better chance at being a first time acceptance!

XDSub

[qjacks 0]

Tnx For the Advice :) Ill Edit My App :)