[Denied]RYANHEFF 74 APPLICATION REVISED

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[Out-Of-Character:WHAT DOES THAT MEAN. Minecraft Account Name:RYANHEFF74.How old are you?:14. Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA EASTERN TIME. Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:YES .Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I LOVE A GOOD ADVENTURE. I AM A GREAT PLANNER. I LOVE TO SPY.How much time could you be on the server weekly?:EITHER SOME WEEKDAYS AND USUALLY EVERY WEEKEND How long have you played mine craft?:5 MONTHS.What do you know about roleplaying? YOU SHOULD ALWAYS STAY IN CHARACTER AND YOU MAKE YOUR OWN DECISIONS.How long have you been doing it?EVER SINCE I GOT MY FIRST VIDEO GAME. What kind?: ROLE PLAYING ADVENTURE.What do you expect this server will be like?:I THINK THE SERVER WIL BE A BLAST AND VERY FUN AND AWSM.What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?I HAVE PLAYED ON PARIDISE CITY,STUMPLAND,PIGGY PALACE AND TPG ADVENTURE I LEFT STUMPLAND BECAUSE THE ADMINS GREIFED AND I LEFT PARADISE CITY BECAUSE THE ADMINS WERE NOT FAIR TO MY PET WOLVES AND MY WORK:Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?YES What about the lore?YES:Name the 4 races on this server HUMANS ORCS ELVES AND DWARVES.How did you hear about us?: YOUTUBE AND YOGCAST Did you vote?: YES What was your favourite Law?:NO GREIFING What was your least favourite Law?:THE 1337 LAW I DIDNT UNDERSTAND WHAT IT MEANT What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?RYANHEFF74 In-Character: WOLF WOODSTOCK Character Name:WOLF WOODSTOCK What is your Race?:ELVES Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:RYANHEFF74 Biography:I AM AN ELF WHO LOST HIS FAMILY TO THE ORCS AND I WASNT TO BECOME A SCOUT ELF Character Age:14 Character Appearance: LIGHT FAST AND AMAZINGINGLY GREEN EYES Character Personality:POLITE TO ELDERS AND PEERS AND A FLIRT Your ambitions:TO HELP THE ELVES FIGHT AGAINST THEIR ENEMIES Can your character read or write?:BOTH Can your character mine?:YES BUT ENJOYS FARMING AND TREE HOPPING Are you a capable builder?YES Can you wield a sword?:YES BUT I FAVOURE THE BOW AND ARROW Enjoy Farming?:YES Does your character have any special skills?:ARCHERY AND TREE CLIMBING/HOPPING A screenshot of your skin:Other Information:A GREAT HUNTER / GATHERER

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[Out-Of-Character:WHAT DOES THAT MEAN. Minecraft Account Name:RYANHEFF74.How old are you?:14. Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA EASTERN TIME. Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:YES .Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I LOVE A GOOD ADVENTURE. I AM A GREAT PLANNER. I LOVE TO SPY.How much time could you be on the server weekly?:EITHER SOME WEEKDAYS AND USUALLY EVERY WEEKEND How long have you played mine craft?:5 MONTHS.What do you know about roleplaying? YOU SHOULD ALWAYS STAY IN CHARACTER AND YOU MAKE YOUR OWN DECISIONS.How long have you been doing it?EVER SINCE I GOT MY FIRST VIDEO GAME. What kind?: ROLE PLAYING ADVENTURE.What do you expect this server will be like?:I THINK THE SERVER WIL BE A BLAST AND VERY FUN AND AWSM.What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?I HAVE PLAYED ON PARIDISE CITY,STUMPLAND,PIGGY PALACE AND TPG ADVENTURE I LEFT STUMPLAND BECAUSE THE ADMINS GREIFED AND I LEFT PARADISE CITY BECAUSE THE ADMINS WERE NOT FAIR TO MY PET WOLVES AND MY WORK:Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?YES What about the lore?YES:Name the 4 races on this server HUMANS ORCS ELVES AND DWARVES.How did you hear about us?: YOUTUBE AND YOGCAST Did you vote?: YES What was your favourite Law?:NO GREIFING What was your least favourite Law?:THE 1337 LAW I DIDNT UNDERSTAND WHAT IT MEANT What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?RYANHEFF74 In-Character: WOLF WOODSTOCK Character Name:WOLF WOODSTOCK What is your Race?:ELVES Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:RYANHEFF74 Biography:I AM AN ELF WHO LOST HIS FAMILY TO THE ORCS AND I WASNT TO BECOME A SCOUT ELF Character Age:14 Character Appearance: LIGHT FAST AND AMAZINGINGLY GREEN EYES Character Personality:POLITE TO ELDERS AND PEERS AND A FLIRT Your ambitions:TO HELP THE ELVES FIGHT AGAINST THEIR ENEMIES Can your character read or write?:BOTH Can your character mine?:YES BUT ENJOYS FARMING AND TREE HOPPING Are you a capable builder?YES Can you wield a sword?:YES BUT I FAVOURE THE BOW AND ARROW Enjoy Farming?:YES Does your character have any special skills?:ARCHERY AND TREE CLIMBING/HOPPING A screenshot of your skin:Other Information:A GREAT HUNTER / GATHERER

[Heff 2460]

PLEASE EXCEPT SOON

:wink: :mrgreen:

[Heff 2460]

[Out-Of-Character:WHAT DOES THAT MEAN. Minecraft Account Name:RYANHEFF74.How old are you?:14. Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA EASTERN TIME. Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:YES .Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I LOVE A GOOD ADVENTURE. I AM A GREAT PLANNER. I LOVE TO SPY.How much time could you be on the server weekly?:EITHER SOME WEEKDAYS AND USUALLY EVERY WEEKEND How long have you played mine craft?:5 MONTHS.What do you know about roleplaying? YOU SHOULD ALWAYS STAY IN CHARACTER AND YOU MAKE YOUR OWN DECISIONS.How long have you been doing it?EVER SINCE I GOT MY FIRST VIDEO GAME. What kind?: ROLE PLAYING ADVENTURE.What do you expect this server will be like?:I THINK THE SERVER WIL BE A BLAST AND VERY FUN AND AWSM.What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?I HAVE PLAYED ON PARIDISE CITY,STUMPLAND,PIGGY PALACE AND TPG ADVENTURE I LEFT STUMPLAND BECAUSE THE ADMINS GREIFED AND I LEFT PARADISE CITY BECAUSE THE ADMINS WERE NOT FAIR TO MY PET WOLVES AND MY WORK:Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?YES What about the lore?YES:Name the 4 races on this server HUMANS ORCS ELVES AND DWARVES.How did you hear about us?: YOUTUBE AND YOGCAST Did you vote?: YES What was your favourite Law?:NO GREIFING What was your least favourite Law?:THE 1337 LAW I DIDNT UNDERSTAND WHAT IT MEANT What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?RYANHEFF74 In-Character: WOLF WOODSTOCK Character Name:WOLF WOODSTOCK What is your Race?:ELVES Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:RYANHEFF74 Biography:I AM AN ELF WHO LOST HIS FAMILY TO THE ORCS AND I WASNT TO BECOME A SCOUT ELF Character Age:14 Character Appearance: LIGHT FAST AND AMAZINGINGLY GREEN EYES Character Personality:POLITE TO ELDERS AND PEERS AND A FLIRT Your ambitions:TO HELP THE ELVES FIGHT AGAINST THEIR ENEMIES Can your character read or write?:BOTH Can your character mine?:YES BUT ENJOYS FARMING AND TREE HOPPING Are you a capable builder?YES Can you wield a sword?:YES BUT I FAVOURE THE BOW AND ARROW Enjoy Farming?:YES Does your character have any special skills?:ARCHERY AND TREE CLIMBING/HOPPING A screenshot of your skin:Other Information:A GREAT HUNTER / GATHERER

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PLEASE READ

[lewisiwel 1]

Dude just a helpful hint u need to write a minimum of 7 paragraphs for your Biography other wise it wont get accepted use this as a guide line it is very helpful :)

Out-Of-Character: Leave this part blank.

-Minecraft Account Name:Put the name of your MC name here. This will be referred to as your MC name.

-How old are you?:Self-explanatory

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Self-explanatory

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes or no

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Just write about yourself. "I'm a student that is x years of age, and I like bananas, etc.."

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:A rough estimate

-How long have you played Minecraft?:Rough estimate

-What do you know about role-playing?:Be thorough here - DEFINE what role-playing means to you. Remember that we want good RPers. Keep in mind RPGs are NOT RPing.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:Your opinion. "I expect it to be good, because blah blah blah"

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: You don't have to list every server you've been to. Just the ones you actually spent time in.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:The rules can be found on our wiki or here.

-Name the 4 races on this server:If you really read about the server, you should know this.

-How did you hear about us?:Self-explanatory

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:This is your forum name.

In-Character: Leave this blank

-Character Name: Your RP name. Note that this is what everyone in the server will call you

-What is your Race?: Your race. One of the four from above. Don't make up a random race please.

-Biography: Write a paragraph here. Minimum of 7 sentences. I don't want to see one line or I'll just deny your application. This is the main reason why applications are denied.

-Character Age:Your preference

-Character Appearance: Description of your appearance.

-Character Personality: Description of your character's personality

-Your ambitions:What your character want to achieve. "World domination, my own home, lots of money, blah blah blah"

-Can your character read or write?: Your character must be realistic. People of younger ages may not be able to read upon joining the server, but be taught how later.

-Can your character mine?: Your character must be realistic.

-Are you a capable builder?: Your character must be realistic.

-Can you wield a sword?: Your character must be realistic.

-Enjoy Farming?: Your character must be realistic.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Your character must be realistic.

Wyrd said:

You have to realize that you're not entering Aegis as an established character, you are entering Aegis to establish a character.

It is acceptable and encouraged to have an under-developed character upon entering the server.

-A screenshot of your skin: Post a screenshot here. DO NOT GIVE ME YOUR SKIN'S TEXTURE. I DON'T SEE ANYTHING WHEN YOU GIVE ME YOUR TEXTURE. This is the second most reason for application denial. You have to give us your screenshot. No screenshot = no acceptance. If you don't know how to post a screenshot of your skin:

1.Go to your inventory.

2.Hit F2

3.Go to your screenshot folder, usually in C:\Users\[your user]\AppData\Roaming\.minecraft\screenshots

4.Go to <!-- m -->http://imageshack.us<!-- m -->

5.Upload

6.Post link

7.???

8.Profit

-Other Information: Does not impact your application.

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Good luck and happy posting.

[Heff 2460]

Dude just a helpful hint u need to write a minimum of 7 paragraphs for your Biography other wise it wont get accepted use this as a guide line it is very helpful :)

Out-Of-Character: Leave this part blank.

-Minecraft Account Name:Put the name of your MC name here. This will be referred to as your MC name.

-How old are you?:Self-explanatory

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Self-explanatory

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes or no

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Just write about yourself. "I'm a student that is x years of age, and I like bananas, etc.."

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:A rough estimate

-How long have you played Minecraft?:Rough estimate

-What do you know about role-playing?:Be thorough here - DEFINE what role-playing means to you. Remember that we want good RPers. Keep in mind RPGs are NOT RPing.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:Your opinion. "I expect it to be good, because blah blah blah"

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: You don't have to list every server you've been to. Just the ones you actually spent time in.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:The rules can be found on our wiki or here.

-Name the 4 races on this server:If you really read about the server, you should know this.

-How did you hear about us?:Self-explanatory

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:This is your forum name.

In-Character: Leave this blank

-Character Name: Your RP name. Note that this is what everyone in the server will call you

-What is your Race?: Your race. One of the four from above. Don't make up a random race please.

-Biography: Write a paragraph here. Minimum of 7 sentences. I don't want to see one line or I'll just deny your application. This is the main reason why applications are denied.

-Character Age:Your preference

-Character Appearance: Description of your appearance.

-Character Personality: Description of your character's personality

-Your ambitions:What your character want to achieve. "World domination, my own home, lots of money, blah blah blah"

-Can your character read or write?: Your character must be realistic. People of younger ages may not be able to read upon joining the server, but be taught how later.

-Can your character mine?: Your character must be realistic.

-Are you a capable builder?: Your character must be realistic.

-Can you wield a sword?: Your character must be realistic.

-Enjoy Farming?: Your character must be realistic.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Your character must be realistic.

Wyrd said:

You have to realize that you're not entering Aegis as an established character, you are entering Aegis to establish a character.

It is acceptable and encouraged to have an under-developed character upon entering the server.

-A screenshot of your skin: Post a screenshot here. DO NOT GIVE ME YOUR SKIN'S TEXTURE. I DON'T SEE ANYTHING WHEN YOU GIVE ME YOUR TEXTURE. This is the second most reason for application denial. You have to give us your screenshot. No screenshot = no acceptance. If you don't know how to post a screenshot of your skin:

1.Go to your inventory.

2.Hit F2

3.Go to your screenshot folder, usually in C:\Users\[your user]\AppData\Roaming\.minecraft\screenshots

4.Go to <!-- m -->http://imageshack.us<!-- m -->

5.Upload

6.Post link

7.???

8.Profit

-Other Information: Does not impact your application.

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Good luck and happy posting.

[Heff 2460]

THANKS ILL TRY THAT'

[Finnigan Cork 1]

It's a minimum of seven sentences, not paragraphs. Re-read the format.