Daniel_621's 3rd (and hopefully last) Application

[Fardan 0]

Out-of-Character

-Minecraft Account Name: daniel_621

-How old are you: 13, almost 14

-Time-Zone/Country: Eastern standard-5 /United States

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, but I am still in school, so of course I'll have some mistakes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a middle school student in New Jersey and I like to play soccer. My favorite band is Rise Against. I love lord of the rings, and fantasy stuff like it.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Most weeks I'll play 10 hours, but at least 4 hours a week.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing minecraft since Spring 2011.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I understand role-playing to be making a character, and living through them, having no knowledge he/she wouldn't have. I role-played in a game called age of mythology, which basically consisted of making a kingdom and interacting with others.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: An epic player made world, where your character can really live and interact with others. This is really cool, because its realistic, and the players really make the world, and the story

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: This is my first minecraft rp server, and I hope my last.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have completely read The Law and the Lore, and I really like the story of the Lore and how the races came to be.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, elf, dwarf and orc. (not including undead, ascended, Aengul, and Daemon)

-How did you hear about us?: I searched "minecraft rpg lotr server" and found a youtube video about the game.

-Did you vote?: I voted many times

-What was your favourite Law?: I can't decide. Either no mindless spamming, or no griefing.

-What was your least favourite Law?: Out of all the laws, I could not find one I disliked.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Fardan

In-Character

-Character Name: Fardan

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: daniel_621 (my login)

-Biography: Fardan's life started out as a happy one. He had two parents that loved him, and an older brother he really respected. They lived in a small village by the name of Archet. This village was so peaceful, that they decided not to keep weapons, however Fardan's brother thought that to be a foolish rule. One day, Fardan went out to work on his Father's farm, because he was sick that day. Then an army of undead came and attacked the village. Fardan was cornered by three undead. Then a sword appeared from no where and struck the three undead. Fardan's brother said "Are you alright, Fardan?". Then one skeleton got up and shot Fardan's brother from behind with an arrow. He said "Take this sword and run". Fardan took the sword and slashed his way out with tears in his eyes. He was chased all the way to the Cloud Temple of Aegis, where he was rescued by several monks. After a day of resting, he strung his sword around his back, and went to find a new home in the world of Aegis, with hopes that he may one day see his parents again.

-Character Age: 16 (A teenage elf, I don't know the real years)

-Character Appearance: An elf with sword on his back, wearing light elven armor.

-Character Personality: At first you will find Fardan to be very quiet. But if you get to know him better, he will talk a lot and you will see what a kind, loyal person he is.

-Your ambitions: I wish to become a respected citizen of a nice town and own a home. I want my job to play a role in my town.

-Can your character read or write? Yes, he enjoys reading, you will not find him writing novels.

-Can your character mine?:No, he prefers not to get his hands dirty.

-Are you a capable builder? No, I don't understand how to make architecture that fits this game.

-Can you wield a sword?: He can wield a sword, but has not mastered it, and uses it for emergencies only.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes, he likes to grow his own food.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He has no more skills than other elves have

-A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=19105

[Tyrion 119]

You have been denied for one or more of the following reasons:

• You did not read the lore.
  Your biography needs to be longer.
  Your biography does not fit the lore.
  Your skin link does not work.
  Your skin does not fit the server.
  You need to put more work into your app.
  I can't understand something.
  The application format is wrong.

Look here to find out how to make a good application!

Bio needs cleaning up + other things could be made nicer.

[Fardan 0]

Look here to find out how to make a good application!

Bio needs cleaning up + other things could be made nicer.

Thanks for suggestions, and replying so fast!