tronans revised app

[Tronan 4]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: tronan999

-How old are you?:18

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United States

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I like to hang with friends,love to watch and play football and basketball,and of course i like to play minecraft

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:every day from 2:00-5:00

-How long have you played Minecraft?: since it came out

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:role playing is either creating or playing a character with a different personality from you and does thing s you wouldn't normaly do in a fictional world.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I think this server will be a great role playing server.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I've played on multiple role play servers before and none of them were really role play all they were was people building bases and attacking each other

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes

-Name the 4 races on this server:human,elf,dwarf,and orc

-How did you hear about us?:I saw the trailer and I saw the server on minecraft forums

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: tronan999

In-Character:

-Character Name: tronan

-What is your Race?:human

-Biography: tronan grew up on small farm in side the Great Kingdom of Oren he always wanted to explore when he was young after working on his farm with his father and brother he would explore the village that he lived in but one day when he was about 16 he was out farming with his father and brother when he suddenly hear some one scream"there are orcs attacking the village so his father and him grabbed swords from the supply closet inside his house and went to face the orc raiding party there were at least 30 or more orcs they fought bravely and during the skirmish his father was hit in the back by an orc battle ax he told tronan to find his mother and his brother so he ran and found his mother and brother inside there home and they all fled,1 year later his brother was drafted into the kings army to fight the undead threat after a while his brother returned for a lttle while but then he was forced back to the front lines and then tronan received word that his brother had been killed during an ambush by an orc raiding party,furious tronan developed a deep hatred for orcs,then they had to evacuate there town again because of the undead that were approaching,tronan was tired of running he wanted to get back at the orcs and the undead but then the war with the undead was over and every thing went back to normal for tronan his mother and him settled into a nice little home and his mother started a bakery shop while tronan helped too but when he was not helping his mother with there bakery he would secretly train to hunt down the orcs that killed his brother one day he left the village to hunt for the orcs he eventually finds them camped out alarmingly near his village he knew he couldn't kill them all so he decided to kill their leader even though not knowing if he actually killed his brother or not.at midnight he crept into their leaders tent and slit the orcs throat and crept out and returned the next day he thought the orcs would leave but they were angered and attacked their village they came out of no where there was no way tronan could kill them all his mother told him to run so he did he ran for help but it was to late the orcs killed everyone in the village.he awore he would kill all of the orcs who did this.

-Character Age:28

-Character Appearance:blue eyes,brown hair,his brothers old chain mail armor(he likes to wear it to remember his lost brother and hopes one day he'll be accepted into the kings army)

-Character Personality:good person,will help anybody in need, strong hatred towards orcs,and a heavy drinker(because of the loss of his family)

-Your ambitions:to hunt down and kill all of the orcs that destroyed his villageand hopefully join the Great kingdom of orens army.

-Can your character read or write?: his mother taught him a little bit of grammar and taught him how to read.

-Can your character mine?: no he has no idea how to mine

-Are you a capable builder?:he can build small wooden homes

-Can you wield a sword?:yes he would train for hours with a sword

-Enjoy Farming?: yes his father taught him how to farm

-Does your character have any special skills?:

-A screenshot of your skin: please tell me if i should change the skin

-Other Information:none

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Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/