application

[faffer 0]

-Minecraft Account Name:owl112

-How old are you?:i am 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: usa, Arizona time (mountain time with ought daylight saveings)

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes i do.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i am a freshman in high school. i have a bunch of friends who play minecraft and i thought this sounded fun.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:maby 2 to 5 hours a week

-How long have you played Minecraft?:since alpha

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: roll playing is kind of like a realistic game that is verry involved.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: i expect it to be like world of warcraft kinda.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i played shadowraze and i left because it crashed too much and was never online.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes i have

-Name the 4 races on this server:human, orc, dwarve, and elf.

-How did you hear about us?: i googled roll playing minecraft servers.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: faffer

In-Character:

-Character Name: faffer

-What is your Race?: human, ascended, or undead

-Biography: grew up as a hunter, father was killed by a mugger. now want to join the army or continue hunting.

-Character Age:17

-Character Appearance: a hunter

-Character Personality: eager to fight and happy

-Your ambitions:join the army and fight

-Can your character read or write?: yes

-Can your character mine?: yes but not well

-Are you a capable builder?:yes

-Can you wield a sword?: definitely

-Enjoy Farming?: not really

-Does your character have any special skills?:bow and arrow

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: i have friends who want to join

[Jadles 85]

You need to be more detailed in your answers.

I didn't get the feeling you understand what role play is... please explain what you think it is, how it will work and how you will fit into it.

Your character biography is much too short. I want to read a background story, not a quick sentence that tells me nothing.

This application seems rushed, like you aren't that bothered about playing on LOTC. Re-read it, correct the errors, take your time and put some effort into it...

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

[faffer 0]

i took your advice, i posted a revised app. please read it here http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/23893-submission-2/page__p__110412__fromsearch__1#entry110412