blaha's improved application

[blaha 0]

-How old are you? 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Canada

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

-How much time could you be on the server weekly? Maybe a few hours a day.- How long have you played minecraft? A few months.

- What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: role playing is being someone that's not you and being someone from history/lore and following the history of what they did or make your own history of adventures and such. Also I've played World Of Warcraft for a few years.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A good role playing server.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I've played on a lot of pvp servers mostly i haven't really quit them i just wanted a good RP server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes i have read the rules and i understand the rules and i agree to them.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, Orc, Elf, and Dwarf

-How did you hear about us?: On minestatus.net

-Did you vote?: Yes

-What was your favorite Law?: Griefing

-What was your least favorite Law?: no use of 1337 speak.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: blahadk

-Character Name: Godum

-Ethnicity: Human

-Biography: Godum was born unusually having big red eyes so he was abandoned by his parents

when he was still a baby. He was left there for a hour crying until some old farmer found him

he was brought back to the farmer's home. It was surrounded by trees he lived in a forest surrounded the house was mountains the old farmer taught him how to grow wheat melons and stuff how to get meat off animals how to shear wool and fish but he didn't like to do all those but fish. One day the orcs came while he was 7 years old the orcs

destroyed the building plundered all the food. The old farmer got damaged really bad had no

chance of survival. Godum was gone fishing that time he was happily catching fishes. He caught 5 fishes and thought that was enough for the day and started to head home.

When he came back he found his home and the old farmer at the front of the door was close to death. The old farmer said "orcs did this" he looked around he didn't see the orcs the old farmers blood was all over the front.

he wanted revenge. He started hating orcs cursing at orcs he built a simple building out of wood more east to where his old home was. His new home was more deeper within the forest then his old house also found salvageable items from the house like cloths.

Everyday from then on he started to practice sword fighting with a emergency sword the old farmer had in case something were to happen he also trained hand to hand combat he found himself love fighting and train himself for 6 years. Now he feels that he's ready to start his journey outside of this place and start traveling to Oren find a town and maybe become a mercenary or get a job and make use of his farming ability or his fighting ability his first priority was earn money first and maybe make some friends he prefers strong friends and challenge them to a fight to see how strong they are in hand to hand combat. to help him avenge the old farmer's death. Also maybe even find a master to train him even more to get stronger.

-Character Age: 13-Character Appearance: Big Red eyes, black hair, simple black shirt, and pants, sleeveless shirt, black wristband, blue belt. taller then average human by 2 inches.

-Character Personality: He has gained a lot of knowledge on survival medicine that can be made from plants. Not very mature yet he likes to fight he's friendly he likes to challenge his friends to fight from time to time to test his strength. Won't act agressive near orcs until he's ready even if he wants to attack them.

-Your ambitions: Wants to fight strong guys and get stronger get revenge on the orcs if he ever defeats them if he does he will aim to be the strongest person in the world and be feared so no one will dare to harm his friends and maybe family.

-Can your character read or write?: He can read a little and write a little but not much the farmer didn't teach him much.

-Can your character mine?: No but he can be taught how to mine he lived with a farmer not a miner.

-Are you a capable builder? not very good builder but can do some simple buildings.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes he can he used a sword he trained with a sword a lot.

-Enjoy Farming?: No he doesn't enjoy farming all that much he prefers fighting.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes he does he can fight unarmed or fight with a sword really well

-A screenshot of your skin: http://s1108.photobucket.com/albums/h417/blahadk/?action=view&current=newlook.png

copy and paste if that doesn't work please

-additional information: he can also use his fists. Also a good fisher.

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short in places.

Your Character Biography is far too short.

There are errors in grammar and punctuation.

It is not neat / in places.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/