HerobrinesNephew 0 Share Posted October 18, 2011 Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: AvoMarakus -How old are you?: 25 -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific Standard, USA -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I believe so, application! -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Um ... I like minecraft & rp. Perfect combo. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 1-2 Hours a Day -How long have you played minecraft?: Since Beta 1.3 -What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Medieval Roleplay 4 Years -What do you expect this server will be like?: Fun, Awesome & Involving -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Xaldin Edge, Left because it changed from RP to freebuild. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes -Name the 4 races on this server. Dwarf, Elf, Human, Orc -How did you hear about us?: A Youtube Video -Did you vote?: Sorry, No -What was your favourite Law?: No Griefing -What was your least favourite Law?: This & the above are weird questions -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: HerobrinesNephew In-Character: -Character Name: Gylfi Gildenhond -What is your Race?: Dwarf -Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: What is that? -Biography: I grew up in the deep dark mines of a Dwarven Cavern Town. My Father raised me to be the best miner I could be. But, I never liked mining. I tried to become a trader, I hope it works. (I'm never good at biographies. I don't know why people think there so important.) -Character Age: 30 -Character Appearance: I wear a blue robe with a chainmail belt & Collar. I have a wonderful black beard & moustache. -Character Personality: I'm stubborn. So my friends say. -Your ambitions: To be the richest dwarf in all the land! -Can your character read or write?: Yes to both -Can your character mine?: I was raised to, though I don't like it I am an expert. -Are you a capable builder?: I like to think so -Can you wield a sword?: As easy as I can hold a beer mug! -Enjoy Farming?:Not a wee bit. I'll leave that to my suppliers. -Does your character have any special skills?: I can kill a creeper with practically no effort. -A screenshot of your skin: What is a screenshot & why would I do anything with my skin? Are you a cannibal? (Seriously, you put this question in In-Character, at the moment I don't have anyway of getting a screenie.) -Other Information: Not a wee bit Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadles 85 Share Posted October 18, 2011 Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
HerobrinesNephew 0 Author Share Posted October 18, 2011 Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/ Like I said, I suck at biographies. I would like it also if you gave me an idea of requirements I should meet. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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