application re-submission 1

[The_Mechazor 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: The_Mechazor

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA eastern standard time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: 100% iv'e spoken english all my life.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i love video games and minecraft. if i get into something i can really get devoted to it. also, i love to have fun and im a very good sport about things.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 10-40 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?: 7 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: i know how into character everyone is and should be and i know its all about fun but some things need to be handled seriously

-What do you expect this server will be like?: a lot of fun and a good time.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: legendary craft, supremes server, rawcritics, monstercraft, and i havent left any of them.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes

-Name the 4 races on this server: dwarves, humans, orcs, and elves.

-How did you hear about us?: ive heard through friends that it is a well known, and good server.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: The_Mechazor

In-Character:

-Character Name: Mech

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Biography: as he came into this world he immediately took to mining and war. he loves exploring cave systems, and going on the hunt for monsters, food, and other people. he loves to eat and frequently is found with cooked steak and apples. he will gladly follow his leaders or lead his buddy's into a cave or into war

-Character Age: 27

-Character Appearance: white, with brown eyes, and a long orange beard. wheres a white robe, like shirt with a sewn on cap (white hoodie).

-Character Personality: he's fierce, hungry, and ready to do whatever he can for his friends, family, and nation.

-Your ambitions: to live a long and successful life filled with good times, good friends, and triumph.

-Can your character read or write?: he can do both but its not his best subject.

-Can your character mine?: very well, basically instinctively.

-Are you a capable builder?: Mech can build very magnificent things but doesnt find as much pleasure in building as he does in war.

-Can you wield a sword?: with great skill and handling

-Enjoy Farming?: not really much at all.

-Does your character have any special skills?: just about the same as all my dwarven companions.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskin...w/both/9/210322

-Other Information: none

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[Dancham 12]

Denied.

-Add more detail to your bio/make it longer.

-The link to your skin is broken.

[Hunter (sckolar) 50]

Far to general. Before it is declined or accepted, the GM will look at every question to see what you did wrong. The application is professionally viewed. They will see if you have good grammer, and if it is interesting, if it's long enough, and you must read the lore. The GMs can tell what you did and did not read because some of the rules are different than most servers, but they are reasonable, and the lore if very important. Hope i helped, good luck :)

-Sckolar

[The_Mechazor 0]

lol someone else told me to make my bio longer on my first time posting and i accidently forgot to resubmit it with the longer version lmao ill get on that right away