TheGuybo's Application

[TheGuybo 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: TheGuybo

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Time/United States

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a high school student and I’m in the 11th grade. I really enjoy minecraft and I am the starting running back for my varisty football team.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 5-10 hours a week

-How long have you played minecraft?: Over a year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Role playing is becoming a character in another world. I have been roleplaying for about 2 months. Dungeons and Dragons.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A realistic minecraft server where I can make friends and fight enemies

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: FyreUK. It was building only and I wanted it to be more realistic

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes and Yes

-Name the 4 races on this server. Elves, Orcs, Humans, and Dwarfs

-How did you hear about us?: A friend is on your server

-Did you vote?: Yes

-What was your favourite Law?: No racism

-What was your least favourite Law?: No greifing. It’s a survival server. Things like that are supposed to happen. Maybe not very often, but should happen occasionally.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? TheGuybo

In-Character:

-Character Name: Hale Hargreaves

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: TheGuybo

-Biography: My name is Hale Hargreaves. I was born in the city of Roanoke 24 years ago in to a family of 5. I am the 3rd of 4 children, Joanna, George, and John. I wasn’t much of a field worker. I left that to my older brothers. What really interested me was my dad and his job as the blacksmith of the town. I would spend hours helping him in his shop everyday until the plague came. The plague came very unexpectedly and left about as quick, but not before taking my father and my younger sister’s lives. I was devastated. I thought I would never be able to move on. I spent my entire life with my dad and just like that, he was gone.

I took over his job at the blacksmith the next year when I was 16 and used the money to support my mother. My brothers had left home and I was left at home, forced to take on the position as the father of the family, or at least what was left of it. My dog was my best friend. I didn’t have time for friends, because I spent all my time working at the blacksmith and reading my father’s books in his study. There, I learned how to farm and how to mine. When I got home, I would have to work the fields till dark.

My mother was very ill and I knew she wasn’t going to live much longer, but I couldn’t leave her. Until 2 months after I turned 19, she hung on, but she was old and hurting when she died. I knew it was for the best. She is happier now. Now, I was alone with my dog, Rover, forced to leave my hometown and find a new life.

We spend time building a house in the woods just outside the city of Edeire. We occasionally went into town to get supplies, but we had no money and so possible source of income. On one of my trips into town, I met a beautiful woman by the name of Rachel. She worked at the market in town. When I saw her, I knew this was the girl I was going to marry, and that’s exactly what I told her. Sure enough, we got married 5 months later and we moved into my house outside of the city. Rover was old and dying by then and a few months later, he died. It saddened me to lose my only friend, but now, I had a new friend and she was here to say. Or so I thought.

Her job supported both of us, but just barely. I had nothing I could do but tend to my farm behind our house. Which wasn’t even big enough to feed us daily. She was very upset by the fact that I wasn’t getting out of the house and trying to support us. Her anger towards me grew up to a point where she left and me a found a rich farmer in town. I was crushed. I have lived in my house by myself for a year, alone and hungry. I had to make a name for myself. I went to a town a days walk away from my home. It was a dwarf town, huge in mining, but that didn’t interest me. What interested me was the fighting tournament they were holding that week. I entered and dominated my way to the finals. I struggled in the championship round, but I came out on top and won the sum of 50,000 Minas, enough to survive for at least 4 months, but I bought a little puppy with some of this money and named I Buster. I couldn’t have been any happier.

-Character Age: 26

-Character Appearance: I am tall and in great shape. Short brown hair and blue eyes.

-Character Personality: I am a great fighter. I am somewhat of a loner, but I am one of the nicest people you will ever meet.

-Your ambitions: I want to make a name of myself as the best fighter in the land. I want to find somebody who will love me unconditionally and never leave me. I be successful in this life and find a job I’m good at and one that would support me and Buster

-Can your character read or write?: Yes. I enjoy reading, but haven’t had the chance since I left home and my father’s vast collection of books in his study.

-Can your character mine?: I don’t do it at the moment but I know how to and am open to mining as a future job.

-Are you a capable builder? Yes. I built my house in the woods and continue to add on to it.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes. I see myself as a very capable fighter and perhaps one of the most adept fighter in Aegis.

-Enjoy Farming?: I farm daily, but I don’t enjoy it. I do it only to support myself.

-Does your character have any special skills?: I am a very good fighter as well as an exceptional builder. ]

-A screenshot of your skin: See Attachments

-Other Information:

[Jadles 85]

Some of your answers are too short.

Please rewrite your explanation of role-playing, explain what you think it is

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

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Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

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-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

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