[Denied]2nd app

[Doppis 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Doppis

-How old are you?: 29

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: est

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm currently working in the IT field and I also go to school at oakland university in michigan. I play a range of games like cod, eq, eq2 and minecraft.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 5-10 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?: 1-2 years

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Rp is basically playing the role of what your character is. I've done it on and off for years depending on what kind of game it is, I usually rp with fantasy type games.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A great experience compared to a lot of these servers hopefully.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I've tried mutts but it's really hard to get logged in their.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes

-Name the 4 races on this server. orc, elf, human, dwarf

-How did you hear about us?: youtube

-Did you vote?: yes

-What was your favourite Law?: no spamming

-What was your least favourite Law?: keeping in character

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? doppis

In-Character:

-Character Name: Doppis

-What is your Race?: elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: doppis

-Biography: An outcast elf that was born underground but didn't believe in the ways of his people. Torture, violence and greed was all around doppis, even his family was full of hatred. As doppis grew up and learned that there was other places outside of this world, he decided to leave without a word. Once doppis was on the surface he found things wouldn't be as easy as anticipated. Everywhere he went doors were shut on his face and he had no choice but to survive on his own in caves and old dens of animals that have died. Doppis stumbled upon some elves that were hunting animals for food and they were overtaken by some orcs, doppis hesitated to jump in and help but worried the elves would die while he watched. In a blur doppis flipped down in the middle of the battle from the tree he was perched in and killed 2 orcs before his feet touched the ground. The elves thanked doppis for the help and offered him food and shelter in their nearby home. The journey has begun...

-Character Age: 21

-Character Appearance: Athletic and slim

-Character Personality: Funny/brave

-Your ambitions: wealth/honor

-Can your character read or write?: both

-Can your character mine?: yes

-Are you a capable builder? yes

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: yes

-Does your character have any special skills?:] fast runner with high endurance

-A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=8590

-Other Information:

[Hunter (sckolar) 50]

I do not think this will get accepted. There is a lot missing. This server is very official, and the GMs will look at every single question that you answered, and if there is something wrong with any of it, then they will decline your application. The common reasons people get denied, is lack of effort, bad grammar, and not a long enough biography. The bio needs to be huge, like to or three big paragraphs. They expect large details, and they can tell when you are telling the truth because you must link your biography to the lore (link is somewhere on the site). As for the screenshot of your skin, if you go to planetminecraft.net, you can post your skin there (make sure you save it as a .png file), and then give the link in your application, and make sure it works. I got denied twice for all these reasons, so i hope I am helping you! Good luck. :)

-Sckolar

[Doppis 0]

I do not think this will get accepted. There is a lot missing. This server is very official, and the GMs will look at every single question that you answered, and if there is something wrong with any of it, then they will decline your application. The common reasons people get denied, is lack of effort, bad grammar, and not a long enough biography. The bio needs to be huge, like to or three big paragraphs. They expect large details, and they can tell when you are telling the truth because you must link your biography to the lore (link is somewhere on the site). As for the screenshot of your skin, if you go to planetminecraft.net, you can post your skin there (make sure you save it as a .png file), and then give the link in your application, and make sure it works. I got denied twice for all these reasons, so i hope I am helping you! Good luck. :)

-Sckolar

Alright...thanks for the input. If it gets denied again I'll make sure the bio is perfect. I'm just new to this type of minecraft play, I've been playing it a while but just by myself. I'll take care of the skin too on the 3rd app lol...if it comes to that ugh.

[Doppis 0]

Alright...thanks for the input. If it gets denied again I'll make sure the bio is perfect. I'm just new to this type of minecraft play, I've been playing it a while but just by myself. I'll take care of the skin too on the 3rd app lol...if it comes to that ugh.

Updated...hope this is good

[Ninjaindian 18]

Yea i got denied twice already and is is REALLY Hard to get in. My friend commandercaleb says its all worth it.

[Haldon 72]

-Character Appearance: Athletic and slim

-Character Personality: Funny/brave

-Your ambitions: wealth/honor

-Can your character read or write?: both

-Can your character mine?: yes

-Are you a capable builder? yes

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: yes

-Does your character have any special skills?:] fast runner with high endurance

Some words of wisdom: try to answer with more than one word. Explain how capable he is in doing all these things. Simply saying 'yes' doesn't add much more depth to your character. For example, from your bio he seems to be a capable fighter, so perhaps you could reflect this in the can you weild a sword question. Perhaps he learned his swordsmanship skills because he had to fend for himself for so long? And if there's something that doesn't fit with your bio but he is good at doing, people don't look too kindly apon that kind of powergaming.

Also out of interest, why was that you have to stay in character your least favourite law? Seeing as this is primarily a roleplaying server.

[Doppis 0]

Some words of wisdom: try to answer with more than one word. Explain how capable he is in doing all these things. Simply saying 'yes' doesn't add much more depth to your character. For example, from your bio he seems to be a capable fighter, so perhaps you could reflect this in the can you weild a sword question. Perhaps he learned his swordsmanship skills because he had to fend for himself for so long? And if there's something that doesn't fit with your bio but he is good at doing, people don't look too kindly apon that kind of powergaming.

Also out of interest, why was that you have to stay in character your least favourite law? Seeing as this is primarily a roleplaying server.

Least favorite law - I guess I don't know how strict it is and I want to have some kind of normal conversation if I'm confused about something. I know Ooc is used for that, I could probably change that. Thanks for the feedback. :)

[Doppis 0]

Least favorite law - I guess I don't know how strict it is and I want to have some kind of normal conversation if I'm confused about something. I know Ooc is used for that, I could probably change that. Thanks for the feedback. :)

Correction....I know why I chose that as my least favorite. All the other ones I totally agree with so I tried to pick the least fav. I wonder if I can say I don't mind any of them?