chartgo's Application

[chartgo 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: chartgo

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Outgoing Rp'er. Very active, and I can be very funny. I like to make friends and play games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Daily except when I'm away on vacation.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: About a year

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: Roleplaying is when you emerge yourself into the body of a person you have created. You act out what your specific character's feelings are.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: It will be fun and very full filling.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have only played a couple of servers most of which I found boring.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I agree completely.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Humans,Orcs,Elves, and Dwarves.

-How did you hear about us?: Friends. Lots and lots of friends.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: chartgo

In-Character:

-Character Name: Zack

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: Zack was born in Oren by a poor couple who did not want to have a child. Not only did they have a child. They had twins. They left both of the babies in the middle of nowhere. One of the babies crawled out of the basket and rolled down a sandy hill stopping in front of some Orcs. The Orcs noticed how tough the baby was. And took him in as there own. The other baby (Zack) Was left there peacfully sleeping. A couple of Elves found him sleeping calmly. They took him as there own. Zack was raised to be sophisticated and became a scribe. Although he was not accepted by the elves immediatlely he soon became to be very liked by Elves. But one day he ran into a barbarian who looked just like him. He soon realised that this burly, obnoxious man was his brother. They grew close despite there differences. But Zack's brother was killed against an Undead attack. When he found out something happened, it was as if something snapped in him. He took on the personality of his brutal brother. And he would unexpectanly go back and forth from his personality to his brother. He is now seeking for answers to stop this curse.

-Character Age: 25

-Character Appearance: Very tall with short blonde hair and blue eyes.

-Character Personality: He has split personalities, sometimes he is calm and educated like an elf at other times he's brutal and tough like an orc.

-Your ambitions: To meet friends and seek out why my personalities switch back and forth.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, only when he is in Zack mode.

-Can your character mine?: Yes

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, only when he is acting like his brother.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes

-Does your character have any special skills?: Ye he is a scribe. (Sometimes)

-A screenshot of your skin: (Attached)

-Other Information: None

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short.

Your character biography is too short.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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