bonkeywonkey 0 Share Posted October 21, 2011 Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: My account name is bonkeywonkey. -How old are you?: i am 12 years old. -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Canada, Pacific time, -8 GMT. -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Ive got a good grip on it because it is the language Ive known it since I was a baby. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I play a lot of minecraft and I am currently making a texture pack and Ive made a few skins for myself. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I would probably be on it for 10 to 15 hours per week. -How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing minecraft for about 9 months (since 1.3). -What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I used to RP with my friends at school from roughly kindergarten to grade 5. I know that Roleplaying is where you are given a character and you have to pretend you are that character. If your character is told something he/she knows about it but if you hear something the character doesn?t know about it. basically you do stuff the way you do it, it has to be the way the character does it. -What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be the only really good rp server. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Ive played multiple servers but none of them were to great, and ive played a couple of servers my brother has made. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I agree with all the rules and the lore is interesting. -Name the 4 races on this server. The four races are the Orc, Elf, Human, and Dwarf. -How did you hear about us?: I learned this from my brother. -Did you vote?: yes I did vote. -What was your favourite Law?: no racism was my favourite law. -What was your least favourite Law?: I didn't have a least favourite law. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? My Lord of the Craft forum account name is bonkeywonkey. In-Character: -Character Name: His name is Bonks. -What is your Race?: Bonks is a Dwarf. -Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: My Lord of the Craft forum account name is bonkeywonkey. -Biography: Bonks grew up in a family of three sisters and four brothers. He is older than his three sisters but he is the second youngest of the boys in his family. His parents were mountain dwarves so Bonks is a mountain dwarf. He lived in a small village close to the great kingdom of Oren because with 8 kids his parents couldn't afford to live in Oren. He was competitive because of this but he was also a bit rough. His dad was a miner so he got enough money from mining for the family. When he was 85 there was an orc raid where Bonks lived and they killed his parents and 1 of his sisters. At the time of the raid Bonks and his brothers were currently visiting Kal'Urguan. two of his sisters got away before the orcs got there their house but one sister and Bonks' parents were still in the house. His dad put up a fight but there were way to many orcs so eventually he died. Also the orcs destroyed and burned down lots of the houses and Bonks lived in one of the houses. Since then he had hated orcs more than ever. After the orc raid Bonks and his three brothers had to start working since they were losing money quick after their dad died and so they would be able to afford enough money to buy and live in a house. Bonks and his two older brothers had to travel far away to get to mines so they weren't home to often. One day when he was in the wilderness and he was traveling home from a mine with one of his brothers, some bandits came, shot and killed the his brother and hit him on the head with a club. When he woke up he was in a prison cell with two other prisoners. The prisoners were an orc named Skarface and a human named Rihawk. Since they had nothing do to and they were alone they started to talk and he realized that all he remembered was that he was hit in the head and knocked out. Also he remembered that he had siblings and the name Thaeron which he thinks was one of his brothers name's. Because of this information Skarface decided to give him the nickname Bonks. When they were talking Rihawk was thinking of a plan to escape and after much persuading Bonks and Skarface agreed. it took a while for skarface to agree because he had a grudge against dwarves for some reason. The main reason Bonks decided to go was because Rihawk supplied him with food from farming and hunting animals. Also Bonks wanted to find his other brothers and sisters but he would need help to find them. Since these three have escaped they've traveled everywhere together. -Character Age: Bonks is 236 years old. -Character Appearance: Bonks has a reddish brown beard and hair, white tattoos on his arms, amber eyes, and he has a tanned looking skin colour. -Character Personality: Bonks is Adventurous, and Creative, but he is also stubborn. -Your ambitions: Bonks ambitions are to become the greatest miner in all of Aegis and to regain his memory. -Can your character read or write?: He can read simple thing but big words are to complicated and he can't right. -Can your character mine?: Bonks is an extremeley good miner since he has been mining since he was pretty young. -Are you a capable builder? He can build detailed things out of stone but he isn't good at making things out of anything else. -Can you wield a sword?: He can't wield a sword but he can wield an axe quite well. -Enjoy Farming?: He never learned how to farm and he doesn't want to.(you cant farm in caves) -Does your character have any special skills?: He is great at crafting and repairing things and he is great at mining. -A screenshot of your skin: -Other Information: There isn't any other information. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadles 85 Share Posted October 22, 2011 Your answers are too short. Please try to give more than one or two word answers. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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