2nd application

[Thax 11]

u]Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: fireworkman1

-How old are you?:16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: England

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I have a good grammar but I do make an occasional error.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am currently in year 11 at school from half 8 – half 2 After school I like to have a rest and listen to music I then go on my xbox 360 /laptop to pastime. My favourite types of games are FPS’s and RPG’s as they pass time the most.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I am able to play 20 hours a week or sometimes at least 5 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing for around 9 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind? : I know a little about roleplaying like you have to take on the role of a character and play out an adventure as this person through their eyes.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I Expect the server to be an open community where the characters work together. And making an adventure and going on a journey.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: This will be my first server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes I have familiarised myself with the rules and without these rules there would be no order and people could destroy your creations

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, Elves, Dwarves and the Orcs. There are also the undead and the Ascended but you need to be approached to join them.

-How did you hear about us?: I was looking at a video by Reckreations and saw the trailer for Lord Of The Craft

-Did you vote?:yes I have

-What was your favourite Law?:you must play in character as this is an RP server must be the best one

-What was your least favourite Law?: There is no bad law

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? fireworkman1

In-Character:

-Character Name: Thax

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Biography: when he was born he lived a peaceful life being taught the ways of his father of how to build great buildings and mine the best ores and also he was also taught how to make great weaponry. When he reached the age of 18 he had to break to his father that he wanted to go traveling, exploring the world whilst he could and on the journey writing of his travels he was. His mother cried not wanting him to go but his father new it was time for him to go and sent him on his travels and gave him his trusty axe. Although he wanted to travel he set his destination for the legendary city of Aegis that he heard of from many different story of so he left his home of Kal’urguan.

After his adventures he hopes to settle down and make his own armoury where he sells a range of weapons and armour

-Character Age: 120 considered young for a dwarf.

-Character Appearance: A blue beard Dwarf warrior with the sword of his father and his father’s old armour.

-Character Personality: helpful but willing to die in a fight for his village/city.

-Your ambitions: To Travel the world and then settle down with his own house and armoury workshop.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes he is a very skilled writer.

-Can your character mine?: yes as he likes to gather his own resources to build but sometimes he trades for resources

-Are you a capable builder? Yes he is a good builder but he would also like to be taught to improve on his designs.

-Can you wield a sword?: he Is able to defend himself.

-Enjoy Farming?: yes he may do farming in his spare time if he needs anything.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He doesn’t need a special skill as he likes to take his time and work at his own pace.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/cyan-dwarf-skin/

-Other Information: Even if I am not accepted I would like to say that this is the most impressive server I have ever seen and I hope it keeps going.

[Jadles 85]

Some of your answers are too short.

Your character biography is too short.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

[Thax 11]

thank you i will restart my application