[Denied]lukestephens Appllaction

[luke360 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

lukestephens

-How old are you?:

15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am in my last year off school, i like to play computer games in my spare time and my main hobby would be most likely playing role-playing servers on many different games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: [/b

Well i spend about 5 hours a day on weekdays and weekends could be 10 hours or none at all so i will say 30-59 hours a week.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

Since December last year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

Well i have played many types of role-playing servers on minecraft as well as over games. I have played city type role-playing server, so you are making money by getting food from one village to a city and having to buy protection for the long journey stuff like that. I have also played as a knight in a server where as my role i had to construct the weapons and ship them to other citys while destroying the vampire population. I have also have played the role of a owner of a town and i had to plan and help construct a city while running it and keeping my people in order.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think the server will be a great role-playing experience and would be full of interesting people and story's, It seems to be a large community and i would love to be a part of that.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on many but i cant remember them all i remember playing on HeroCraft and i didn't leave them but i had a break from minecraft and couldn't find them again.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

Yes i understand

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Orcs, The Humans, The Dwarfs and The Elfs

-How did you hear about us?:

A friend told me about your server

-Did you vote?:

Yes

-What was your favourite Law?:

You must keep in character

-What was your least favourite Law?:

I don't really have any

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

luke360

In-Character:20.

-Character Name:

Hunk

-What is your Race?:

Orc

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

luke360

-Biography:

Hunk was 13 when the tribe attacked there village, the Dwarfs came in numbers and overran the village attacking and killing as many Orcs as they could. They destroyed and burn down the village until they saw the little boy Orc sitting in the corner over his mum and dads body.

Hunk turn around and lashed out at the Dwarfs killing them one by one he killed them all and then set on his adventure for the land he had herd of lord craft. He spent a long time traveling meeting many more Orcs as well some humans, Hunk befriend these and even when Hunk meet a Dwarf he didn't hold a grudge and even befriended the Dwarf. This was Hunk passage to change and he wanted to forgot what he had done and become the friendly Orc who every one liked and loved.

Hunk was nearly there he had a hour long trip along sea but the problem was he had to leave his friends behind as he knew he could not get them in to the land lord craft as well. So Hunk set off with a tear in his eye to meet his cousin Karak'Drungen who was working as a construct builder in new Terriko. The boat journey was long ad hard but when i arrived there to see my last and only family member standing at the docks waiting for me.

We started to work together as i helped him revert the town new Terriko from there recent Undead attack.

-Character Age:

16

-Character Appearance:

Hunk is a normal sized Orc who has right green eyes, wear low cut brown shorts, a skull of a dwarf he killed around his belt and a brown sort of belt thing around his torso. He has a scar going along his torso where a dwarf tried to slice him in half.

-Character Personality: Hunk is a nice out going Orc but he does have bad days and can filp out.

-Your ambitions:

His ambitions is to make friends and become a known Orc across the land.

-Can your character read or write?:

He can do both as taught from his old human friend on his journey into the land of hero craft.

-Can your character mine?:

My character can mine but does struggle from his wound to his torso but he hopes to see a human doctor who will fix him up.

-Are you a capable builder?

Hunk would prefer not to build as he finds it boring but he can design some unique things when he puts his mind to it.

-Can you wield a sword?:

He was a born solider and will fight to the death if he is needed to.

-Enjoy Farming?:

He can farm quite well but prefers not to as taught by the human's he can farm wheat and sugar very well.

-Does your character have any special skills?: ]

He is very talented in unarmed fighting and can fight better with no weapons then he could do with a sword

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://imgur.com/gbKqN

-Other Information: [/b

Thank you for reading]

[luke360 0]

I am sorry for the post for some reason even tho i put the written out of bold it came out looking the same i hope you can read it ok.

[luke360 0]

BTW with donations is it a monthly pay or yearly?

[KhronosVII 14]

Please work on the grammar, especially of the RP section, there are quite a few issues, even though you claim to have a good grasp

Please edit, then repost it, you should then be accepted

in answer to your question, Donantion is a one off thing, and you dont have to donate, its just very helpful!

[luke360 0]

Please work on the grammar, especially of the RP section, there are quite a few issues, even though you claim to have a good grasp

Please edit, then repost it, you should then be accepted

in answer to your question, Donantion is a one off thing, and you dont have to donate, its just very helpful!

I am editing my application now sorry for the bad grammar, also in game i am having a problem where i am invisible i was wondering if this is normal or a bug?