Bluemonkee6's third application

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Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Bluemonkee6

-How old are you?:15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Eastern standard time,Canada.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:i am a friendly guy from Canada who enjoys playing video games on PS3 and PC,when i'm not playing video games i'm usually outside in nature.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Several hours a day depending on how busy i am.

-How long have you played Minecraft?:Since patch 1.5.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:I know that roleplaying is about becoming a fictional person with a realistic background and acting that person out based on that characters knowledge.I also have some previous experience in roleplaying,i have been on many Garry's Mod RP servers and a few Minecraft RP servers.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:A huge,fun world with lots of interesting people.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on a server called Neo-utopia, i left due to the fact that not many people played on it anymore.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes

-Name the 4 races on this server:Human,Elf,Dwarf,Orc.

-How did you hear about us?:Through a youtube video called "Lord of the Craft".

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Bluemonkee6

In-Character

-Character Name:Daral Aerune

-What is your Race?:Human

-Biography:Daral was born and raised in the town of Al'Khazar in the great kingdom of Oren.Daral never knew much about the outside world and as a child, did not have much freedom,his father was a miner working in the Oren mine shaft and his mother was a seamstress.At a very young age he had a great interest in adventuring the world and seeking forbidden knowledge although his father detested this idea and wanted him to follow in his footsteps and earn a living mining.One day at the age of 15,he met an Elf named Calro in the village and the two became friends,Calro told story's of the world outside Oren that piqued Daral's interest, Daral then decided to run away from home with Calro and explore the world of Aegis together.Calro was handy with a blade for an Elf and taught Daral how to fight.The two were wandering about one day when they encountered a camp of Orcs who were furious at the sight of trespassers and killed Calro,Daral then tried to fight back against the Orcs but was overwhelmed by there brute force.Daral woke up with no clue as to where he was and was suffering from amnesia from the beating he received from the Orc's.

-Character Age:20

-Character Appearance:Medium build,5'8,blue eyes,dark brown hair,slightly tanned skin.

-Character Personality:Friendly and adventurous,but shy when talking to people he doesn't know.

-Your ambitions:Find out where he is and find a place to settle, then adventure the world for forbidden knowledge and fun.

-Can your character read or write?:Yes.

-Can your character mine?:Recieved some basic mining instructions from his father.

-Are you a capable builder?:no

-Can you wield a sword?:Yes,he was trained by his friend,Calro.

-Enjoy Farming?:Yes,he had to farm to help provide for his family

-Does your character have any special skills?:no

-A screenshot of your skin:http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/713/20111016183136.png/

-Other Information:None

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Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/