eegNoodles application 2

[EegNoodles 5]

out of character

-Minecraft Account Name:Egg_Noodlez.

-How old are you?:13 years old.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:england.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes, but i do make some typos

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:go to school, come home and play either

oblivion or minecraft or whatch eithher the yogscast or ray william johnson on youtube

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 5/10 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?:5 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:i have been role playing for a while now with oblivion and fallout 3. role playing involes playing a character, much like in a play but only you improvise.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:fun, serious role playing with other with similar intrests to me.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:i still play crafts 'r' us server, but very rarly.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:i have read them all several times.

-Name the 4 races on this server: human, orc, elf and dwarf.

-How did you hear about us?:the yogscast favourited your youtube trailer.

-Did you vote?:yes.

-What was your favourite Law?: fighting in citys is a punishable offence

-What was your least favourite Law?:none. they are all fair.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: EegNoodles

In-Character

-Character Name: eitas lavit

-What is your Race?: human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:EegNoodles

-Biography:eitas was and orhpan at birth. he was brung up by an old man in the sewers of alkazar. the old man tought him to read and write and how to weild a sword and how to use magic. eitas allways dreampt of being a great adventurer. when the chance finally arose in ageis, he left his home and the old man to explore the world. he first arrived in malnor, where he settled for 2 years. he left to travel to haven, the home of the ascended, but failed to find it. he returned to malnor to wait for the opertunity to explore again.

-Character Age:26

-Character Appearance:blond hair , always wheres a cape, with a sword on his back, big eyes

-Character Personality:freindly and often helpfull, but can get distracted by things. can be ruthless at times. often stops to talk to people about news and to share storys with fellow travilers.

-Your ambitions:to be the guild master of a band of warriors

-Can your character read or write?:yes he can. he was tought be the old man.

-Can your character mine?:yes, but does not stick to a routine. this means he does not get much luck, but when he does find something its worth it.

-Are you a capable builder?:yes, i mainly build either medieval style houses or circular ones.

-Can you wield a sword?:yes, as tought by the old man.

-Enjoy Farming?:yes, but not as much as the other skills as he was not tought this by the old man.

-Does your character have any special skills?:good at trading as he is good at haggling at getting things for less.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information:he enjoys mainly wandering and drifting from place to place.

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Denied

Needs serious proofreading

Wrong definition of roleplaying

The application as a whole is too short, specifically the bio