[Amendment] Ground-Breaking Beard Focus Amendment

[_AzureLexi 769]

Changes/Additions are in green, removals are strikethrough

 

Purpose: A clarification to allow for more versatility in hairstyles to be used with Beard/Hair foci, as well as being more inclusive of broader hair types. I want my character to have an arcane afro.

[Magic Invention] Arcane Focus

Before:

Spoiler

Beard-Specific Red Lines:

 

-Beards must have some form of trinket upon them which would give them this quality, such as a focus crystal, quietus crystal, mage gold, or titan's eye. These trinkets must be a ring, wire, band, or otherwise anything that could bind a beard in some manner.

 

-Should wires of arcanium be sewn into it the entire beard would gain the quality as if it were made of arcanium. Just like arcanium the beard would maintain its physical properties, therefore physIcally being of the same strength of hair. Perhaps taking the form of a beard made of fire, ice, or conjured snakes, upon casting (purely freeform.)

 

-Movement is entirely aesthetic it can not be used for an extra appendage.

-Beards bejeweled with focuses provide all the benefits of any other focus.

-Beard must be at least 1 foot to be used as a Focus. (Obscuring at least a third of the front of the toro.)

 

-While the beard may move about while casting, it can not be controlled in anyways consciously. This is especially true in combat.

 

-Hair of over 3 feet can alternatively be used to similar effect. (All the way down to the bottom of a skins back.)

 

-Voidstalkers with a second mind may find that the beard might harmlessly attack them, merely flailing about.

 

-Follows all other redlines.

 

After:

Spoiler

Beard-Specific Red Lines:

 

-Beards must have some form of trinket upon them which would give them this quality, such as a focus crystal, quietus crystal, mage gold, or titan's eye. These trinkets must be a ring, wire, band, or otherwise anything that could bind a beard in some manner.

 

-Should wires of arcanium be sewn into it the entire beard would gain the quality as if it were made of arcanium. Just like arcanium the beard would maintain its physical properties, therefore physIcally being of the same strength of hair. Perhaps taking the form of a beard made of fire, ice, or conjured snakes, upon casting (purely freeform.)

 

-Movement is entirely aesthetic it can not be used for an extra appendage.

-Beards bejeweled with focuses provide all the benefits of any other focus.

-Beard must be at least 1 foot in total length to be used as a Focus. (Obscuring at least a third of the front of the toro.)

 

-While the beard may move about while casting, it can not be controlled in anyways consciously. This is especially true in combat.

 

-Hair of over 3 feet in total length can alternatively be used to similar effect. (All the way down to the bottom of a skins back.)

 

-Voidstalkers with a second mind may find that the beard might harmlessly attack them, merely flailing about.

 

-Follows all other redlines.

 

[MsLinni 829]

I wrote this originally at 15, yeah that was a pointless redline lol!